for The explosion of your anger9/30/2016 c1 
97rust phoenix
The emotion in this is very powerful and definitely comes through. The suddenness of the beginning of the poem captures the suddenness of the anger, and the anticlimactic response to the apology is so real.
97rust phoenixThe emotion in this is very powerful and definitely comes through. The suddenness of the beginning of the poem captures the suddenness of the anger, and the anticlimactic response to the apology is so real.