for Twelve10/24/2016 c1 ARagTag
Cute and sweet story! I like how well you described characters and setting, especially "the sheep-studded green fields beyond". But I think when you added a link to your A/N in the beginning of the story it came out wrong? I believe you have to use the link connector option, your link to youtube is only the last couple symbols. I've experienced similar problems in the past, this may or may not what happened to your link.
Hope I helped!
Cute and sweet story! I like how well you described characters and setting, especially "the sheep-studded green fields beyond". But I think when you added a link to your A/N in the beginning of the story it came out wrong? I believe you have to use the link connector option, your link to youtube is only the last couple symbols. I've experienced similar problems in the past, this may or may not what happened to your link.
Hope I helped!