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1/24 c2 heelenah
love the story yet interesting. I want to 0ffer you something related to your work and I want to 0ffer you to join our platform. If you feel interested please leave your ema1l. Thank you
1/9/2020 c1 15maskedhero100
Well that got dark fast... gripping first chapter by the way. This is rather intriguing and i look forward to more.

Your character interactions are solid, and your description of the environment is lucid. It feels like your actually there with them.

Only negative I can think off is i kind of wish for a bit of background and introduction to the characters instead of being introduced to our heroine and her freinds in one go before they are whisked off...but maybe you have plans to go into detail with them later.

Keep up the good work.
10/4/2016 c1 1FueledByPepsiMax
Yey! You're back! A very intriguing story, can't wait to read more! :D

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