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10/14/2016 c1 4Mrs.Bluhm
This was amazing! The detail brought me into Toriel point of view, his terror became my terror. Loved it, keep up the amazing work!
10/14/2016 c1 70BradytheJust
Wow...
Okay, so I'm not the biggest fan of horror, but I figured I'd give this a go. (I'm going to have nightmares...)
It was so good! "Sinking into himself in his dark place where only the faintest, ghostly white flower dared bloom" Wonderful word choice!

The sounds you described made the tension reach scary heights, and I like how you kept us in Toriel's viewpoint, all we knew was what he did.

Seriously, the stories that come from nowhere are often the best and this is no exception.
Keep it up! :)

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