5/7/2021 c1 AvegaLil
This book has me all kinds of worked up. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
This book has me all kinds of worked up. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
9/30/2019 c45 mal
great story, but why did you delete your other ones? just curious :) I want them back so I i can binge read them again
great story, but why did you delete your other ones? just curious :) I want them back so I i can binge read them again
3/8/2018 c45 K
What a phenomenal story! I love the twist and turns you constantly bring the reader through. So refreshing, as I sometimes find romance stories can lose their interest towards the end, or stop having any plot/development once the " boy gets the girl", in a general sense:D Wonderful story, enjoy your well-deserved break after sticking to this story for so long!
What a phenomenal story! I love the twist and turns you constantly bring the reader through. So refreshing, as I sometimes find romance stories can lose their interest towards the end, or stop having any plot/development once the " boy gets the girl", in a general sense:D Wonderful story, enjoy your well-deserved break after sticking to this story for so long!
3/3/2018 c27 User Currently Unavailable
They're really sweet together and I love the way you describe their feelings with small actions. Like tapping their feet at each other and stuff like that.
I'd really wish you'd proofread one more time before posting, though. Maybe let the story rest for a while and come back to proofread? It would take it to another level, 'cause it IS a really good story. :)
They're really sweet together and I love the way you describe their feelings with small actions. Like tapping their feet at each other and stuff like that.
I'd really wish you'd proofread one more time before posting, though. Maybe let the story rest for a while and come back to proofread? It would take it to another level, 'cause it IS a really good story. :)
2/26/2018 c45 bre romero
jesus...GET THIS PUBLISHED
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jesus...GET THIS PUBLISHED
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2/25/2018 c45 brhi
Thanks for such an amazing story. I've been following for a very long time. I'm sad to see it come to an end but I'm excited to read your next story
Thanks for such an amazing story. I've been following for a very long time. I'm sad to see it come to an end but I'm excited to read your next story
2/25/2018 c24 User Currently Unavailable
So, I'm halfway through and it seems the MC's already got together. I have a little difficulty seeing where this is going from here, but I guess you have a surprise in store for us.
I'm still enjoying the story, and I was particularly enjoying the moment when Aiden kicked his shoe at Emma's a moment after he had taken them off. ;) Sorry, I couldn't resist. I always make those small errors myself, and I just like the fact that I'm not the only one. ;)
Anyway, you're still doing a really good job. :)
So, I'm halfway through and it seems the MC's already got together. I have a little difficulty seeing where this is going from here, but I guess you have a surprise in store for us.
I'm still enjoying the story, and I was particularly enjoying the moment when Aiden kicked his shoe at Emma's a moment after he had taken them off. ;) Sorry, I couldn't resist. I always make those small errors myself, and I just like the fact that I'm not the only one. ;)
Anyway, you're still doing a really good job. :)
2/21/2018 c44 mal
please please please update soon
please please please update soon
2/20/2018 c22 User Currently Unavailable
I'm still really enjoying this story, but I can't help but feel that maybe you should've read it one more time before posting. There are a few typos or 'she' instead of 'her' and so on. And 'of instead of 'have.'
Apart from sometimes getting a little confused about those things, I still really, really like this. I usually get bored after a chapter or two, but I don't with this one. :)
I don't have time to read that often, but I AM reading even though I don't review all the time. :)
I'm still really enjoying this story, but I can't help but feel that maybe you should've read it one more time before posting. There are a few typos or 'she' instead of 'her' and so on. And 'of instead of 'have.'
Apart from sometimes getting a little confused about those things, I still really, really like this. I usually get bored after a chapter or two, but I don't with this one. :)
I don't have time to read that often, but I AM reading even though I don't review all the time. :)
2/16/2018 c43 6Angel Princess 31
Wow, this story is so good! ! ! I binge read between doing homework and rehearsal for a musical. Please update this soon! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
Angel Princess 31
Wow, this story is so good! ! ! I binge read between doing homework and rehearsal for a musical. Please update this soon! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
Angel Princess 31
2/5/2018 c43 anhimals
Love the Aiden and Emma fluff! They deserve it after everything they have both been through.
Love the Aiden and Emma fluff! They deserve it after everything they have both been through.
2/5/2018 c12 User Currently Unavailable
Just a quick 'review to say that I'm still reading, but not as often, 'cause I don't have much time. My opinion is pretty much the same. Don't want to stop reading, but I have to. :(
Just a quick 'review to say that I'm still reading, but not as often, 'cause I don't have much time. My opinion is pretty much the same. Don't want to stop reading, but I have to. :(
1/31/2018 c42 mal
i love this so much! please update really soon!
i love this so much! please update really soon!
1/29/2018 c42 Guest
I feel so bad for her! Hope it's a short recovery
I feel so bad for her! Hope it's a short recovery