for Bad Apple11/7/2016 c6 
2CherryAngel991
I like Ryota. Ryota is funny. Also, this is AWESOME. It's really cool so far! Update soon, yeah?
2CherryAngel991I like Ryota. Ryota is funny. Also, this is AWESOME. It's really cool so far! Update soon, yeah?
11/7/2016 c1 CherryAngel991
Wow. Just wow. No, not just wow. Wowza is way more appropriate. THIS IS GREAT though I guess I should've expected that from you, heh. I mean, I have absolutely no idea what's going on, but it seems super cool so far.
Wow. Just wow. No, not just wow. Wowza is way more appropriate. THIS IS GREAT though I guess I should've expected that from you, heh. I mean, I have absolutely no idea what's going on, but it seems super cool so far.
11/5/2016 c6 3Da Kaleidoscope
WHY YOUR CHAPTERS BE SHORT.
Well, they're taking it pretty calmly actually. I would panic since there isn't any internet.
And Carlos made a bad assumption. Who says it can't be a guy? If I transported a bunch of teenagers to a parallel world, that would probably be my response so that they think I'm weird.
I like Ryota. He's a nerd. And Soul is actually pretty calm.
3Da KaleidoscopeWHY YOUR CHAPTERS BE SHORT.
Well, they're taking it pretty calmly actually. I would panic since there isn't any internet.
And Carlos made a bad assumption. Who says it can't be a guy? If I transported a bunch of teenagers to a parallel world, that would probably be my response so that they think I'm weird.
I like Ryota. He's a nerd. And Soul is actually pretty calm.
10/27/2016 c4 Da Kaleidoscope
WOOT WOOT WOOT NEW CHAPTER.
Alright. I like the new character introductions. It's a nice setup. Now if you would JUST WRITE THE DANG STORY.
WOOT WOOT WOOT NEW CHAPTER.
Alright. I like the new character introductions. It's a nice setup. Now if you would JUST WRITE THE DANG STORY.
10/27/2016 c3 Da Kaleidoscope
WOOOOO AND UPDATE.
I found an error. You said "that is" instead of "that it."
Okay, since you asked for an actual review, I'll leave one. But besides that one error, I really didn't see anything. I like how you added tidbits about the characters to develop who they were beforehand. The situations and their thought process are pretty nice. Now I can't wait to see how you'll link them all together.
WOOOOO AND UPDATE.
I found an error. You said "that is" instead of "that it."
Okay, since you asked for an actual review, I'll leave one. But besides that one error, I really didn't see anything. I like how you added tidbits about the characters to develop who they were beforehand. The situations and their thought process are pretty nice. Now I can't wait to see how you'll link them all together.
10/25/2016 c2 Da Kaleidoscope
Woooooo NEXT CHAPTER YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY. I love the character descriptions. The names are good as well. I like Ryota the best; I kinda identify with him.
Woooooo NEXT CHAPTER YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY. I love the character descriptions. The names are good as well. I like Ryota the best; I kinda identify with him.