for Topsy Turvy4/10/2017 c1 
2CherryAngel991
Oh goodness. This already seems all topsy turvy and it's just begun. Great writing, as usual.
2CherryAngel991Oh goodness. This already seems all topsy turvy and it's just begun. Great writing, as usual.
11/25/2016 c1 Guest
Hmm.. What to say.. I was interested in Sebastian by the way you described him, though his actions on the last parts of the chapter doesnt fit well with the non-womanizer part. Not that he was doing that, it was just at odds with it you know. Maybe you should take out the "non-womanizer " part of the description for him. He wasn't womanizing, but the way he kissed Leia and said she's his girl sounded like he HAD been or COULD easily be if he chose to.
Love the intro, and I'm pretty sure this story will attract lots of readers here. Nice job all in all!
Hmm.. What to say.. I was interested in Sebastian by the way you described him, though his actions on the last parts of the chapter doesnt fit well with the non-womanizer part. Not that he was doing that, it was just at odds with it you know. Maybe you should take out the "non-womanizer " part of the description for him. He wasn't womanizing, but the way he kissed Leia and said she's his girl sounded like he HAD been or COULD easily be if he chose to.
Love the intro, and I'm pretty sure this story will attract lots of readers here. Nice job all in all!
11/24/2016 c1 3Da Kaleidoscope
Oh god this mess is so beautiful. I like how different the characters are and how entertwined everything is.
3Da KaleidoscopeOh god this mess is so beautiful. I like how different the characters are and how entertwined everything is.