for Blood & Candy5/29/2017 c2 
1Tomoyuki Tanaka
Oh, wow. That was deep, dark, gruesome and totally awesome. Nice job, Aya! Hiroki deserved that, no questions asked. Now the real question is...when will you continue this story? I like the morbid atmosphere you built, and the characters are just so brilliantly developed. You've great style, perfect for telling a tale like this. I wish I could write like you.
But I understand some things had come up in life, and you lost a gaming buddy, so I apologize if I sound too pushy. Take your time, as much as you need, and I hope you recover. You're definitely a talented writer with a great flair for writing, I just want you to know that.
1Tomoyuki TanakaOh, wow. That was deep, dark, gruesome and totally awesome. Nice job, Aya! Hiroki deserved that, no questions asked. Now the real question is...when will you continue this story? I like the morbid atmosphere you built, and the characters are just so brilliantly developed. You've great style, perfect for telling a tale like this. I wish I could write like you.
But I understand some things had come up in life, and you lost a gaming buddy, so I apologize if I sound too pushy. Take your time, as much as you need, and I hope you recover. You're definitely a talented writer with a great flair for writing, I just want you to know that.
5/29/2017 c1 Tomoyuki Tanaka
Oh, wow. This is a pretty great start. Awesome story. You have a great way of expressing the characters and their emotions, and the nightmare was appropriately dark. Aya's trauma and dark past were also portrayed very well.
Oh, wow. This is a pretty great start. Awesome story. You have a great way of expressing the characters and their emotions, and the nightmare was appropriately dark. Aya's trauma and dark past were also portrayed very well.