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Hello there.I altogether appreciated your narrative and have a fantastic idea for turning it into a comic! I'm thrilled to discuss it further and bring it to reality.
Let's talk soon! You can contact me through Discord (rubyfizz87) or email ().
Thanks,
Ruby
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Cool start. I can see Rockie will experience growth through the story. The discrimination against magics, though. I don’t know if I want to insult someone who can level a city block. I’ll read more.
3Crimson GCool start. I can see Rockie will experience growth through the story. The discrimination against magics, though. I don’t know if I want to insult someone who can level a city block. I’ll read more.
3/8 c21 6Viewer27Man
The fall border is ruled by a bad man and is divided. A woman approaches he who apparently only hates magic. A servant woman says guards caught someone who wanted to escape. Orcs bring her in. He calls her pretty. She says his end is nigh, and she'll see to it. He says the slums will get worse, she spits on him, he likes the taste of her blood, she dies, and he finds it funny liking his position. Elsewhere bubble girl wants to strangle our first hero. He thinks he's fine and can do it alone since no one knows he's here while reminded this was a bad idea. The new boy is shy and can't defend him all that well. Bubble girl says it's time to go. Our first hero calls them scared and that he promised he'd stay. Bubble girl reminds him they'd be up against an army. The shy boy says how bad his life is and she gives our first hero another reason why this was a bad idea. Bubble girl says nothing will change here and proposes giving up and surviving. Before our first hero can argue the beanie boy punches his gut and gavel girl cuffs him. Bubble girl sees the shy boy so hopeless and apologizes. He apologizes back and offers to see them out. As she leaves sad they find a pile of unconscious orcs that our first hero says he didn't do. As they accuse him of lying the shy boy vouches for him. He makes the gavel girl mad enough at him to punch him, and then he asks to not be hit. Beanie boy can barely believe this place exists. Our first hero stops and insists on saving the world. Bubble girl says it's a bad idea going over the extremes the bad lord goes to to prevent magics. They're uneasy and want to leave. Suddenly an orc grabs the gavel girl.
We get a first impression of the ruler and he's bad and likes to flaunt it. Then our heroes discuss how bad this place is, and have to convince (cough) force (cough) Rockie to leave. They feel sad for Drew though in this bad circumstances. Then the orcs attack. Most of the chapter is about sad situations.
Rockie made a bad move, but now that they've learned how bad the situation is it provokes wanting someone to defeat the bad guys here, or wanting to see the results he wants (except maybe if he's the one who does it).
This makes me wonder, what in the world does this bad guy have to keep mages (the adults at least) that can take out a giant golem and an army of robots with relative ease too scared to not have done anything before?
Favorite Part: K.O. getting payback. He kind of deserved that for getting sucker punched earlier.
6Viewer27ManThe fall border is ruled by a bad man and is divided. A woman approaches he who apparently only hates magic. A servant woman says guards caught someone who wanted to escape. Orcs bring her in. He calls her pretty. She says his end is nigh, and she'll see to it. He says the slums will get worse, she spits on him, he likes the taste of her blood, she dies, and he finds it funny liking his position. Elsewhere bubble girl wants to strangle our first hero. He thinks he's fine and can do it alone since no one knows he's here while reminded this was a bad idea. The new boy is shy and can't defend him all that well. Bubble girl says it's time to go. Our first hero calls them scared and that he promised he'd stay. Bubble girl reminds him they'd be up against an army. The shy boy says how bad his life is and she gives our first hero another reason why this was a bad idea. Bubble girl says nothing will change here and proposes giving up and surviving. Before our first hero can argue the beanie boy punches his gut and gavel girl cuffs him. Bubble girl sees the shy boy so hopeless and apologizes. He apologizes back and offers to see them out. As she leaves sad they find a pile of unconscious orcs that our first hero says he didn't do. As they accuse him of lying the shy boy vouches for him. He makes the gavel girl mad enough at him to punch him, and then he asks to not be hit. Beanie boy can barely believe this place exists. Our first hero stops and insists on saving the world. Bubble girl says it's a bad idea going over the extremes the bad lord goes to to prevent magics. They're uneasy and want to leave. Suddenly an orc grabs the gavel girl.
We get a first impression of the ruler and he's bad and likes to flaunt it. Then our heroes discuss how bad this place is, and have to convince (cough) force (cough) Rockie to leave. They feel sad for Drew though in this bad circumstances. Then the orcs attack. Most of the chapter is about sad situations.
Rockie made a bad move, but now that they've learned how bad the situation is it provokes wanting someone to defeat the bad guys here, or wanting to see the results he wants (except maybe if he's the one who does it).
This makes me wonder, what in the world does this bad guy have to keep mages (the adults at least) that can take out a giant golem and an army of robots with relative ease too scared to not have done anything before?
Favorite Part: K.O. getting payback. He kind of deserved that for getting sucker punched earlier.
2/24 c1 adamfranklin.uu
The characters were believable, and the emotions kept me involved throughout. I think it would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life!
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Addy
The characters were believable, and the emotions kept me involved throughout. I think it would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life!
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories.
Warm regards,
Addy
1/29 c20 Viewer27Man
The place preemptively gives the chills. They can't go in, but they can't let him die, but they can't die with him. The bubble girl wants to get help, but the beanie boy thinks he won't last that long, and won't snitch so he crawls in. Gavel girl can't let him go out like that and crawls in too. Voices and memories tell bubble girl not to go. She puts a message on a piece of her dress and having a squirrel deliver it then runs. The 2 in the tunnel don't think she's coming. The night sky is black here instead of the purple they're used to. Mud is everywhere and breathing causes anxiety. They go this way along shrubs. They find old wooden houses while it's quiet, too quiet. Then crunch sounds scare them. The first thing the gavel girl sees by lantern light is a tall orc. It just scares her. Wood creaks making the orc turn around. The orc tosses a dusty non-hero in a barrel to the ground. 2 more orcs walk up and they coerce the dusty guy to speak. He begs forgiveness trying to save his sister. Our heroes watch and get angrier. On the ready they are suddenly grabbed into something warm and soft: bubble girl. The orc can't find them. The dusty guy honors the tall orc by bowing his head into the mud before being ordered to go. Then the orcs leave. After bubble girl scolds the others for bringing her back here she answers that what she did with her bubble was new for her. Is it like the stories? It's worse. She wanted to forget this place of messed up governing. After some concern they decide to go find our first hero. Through the fog the bubble girl describes missing sites she remembers. They then find 2 orc unconscious and know he's not far. A worn out house, her old home, gets bubble girl's attention. The door swings open and our first hero appears, and he introduces them to the guy the chapter's named after.
The other 3 young group we know best journey to the place of fall where orcs patrol in some reign of tyranny and find Rockie with another guy. Of course Belle is delayed with her compromise of sending a squirrel to send a message back home first.
Also it's interesting that the normal night sky is purple for them, and the comparison is a nice way to slip that in.
We also get it definitively stated that Belle is from the Fall place this chapter, and it's likely related to her recent nightmares.
I'm not sure what Belle's new bubble trick exactly was, but I'd wager it helped their stealth by enabling them to not be seen even when the orc was looking closely for them in the shrubs.
Welp... they found Rockie. He should probably fear his friends' wrath at the start of the next chapter...
Favorite Part: Belle just casually telling a squirrel to deliver her message and it seems to work.
The place preemptively gives the chills. They can't go in, but they can't let him die, but they can't die with him. The bubble girl wants to get help, but the beanie boy thinks he won't last that long, and won't snitch so he crawls in. Gavel girl can't let him go out like that and crawls in too. Voices and memories tell bubble girl not to go. She puts a message on a piece of her dress and having a squirrel deliver it then runs. The 2 in the tunnel don't think she's coming. The night sky is black here instead of the purple they're used to. Mud is everywhere and breathing causes anxiety. They go this way along shrubs. They find old wooden houses while it's quiet, too quiet. Then crunch sounds scare them. The first thing the gavel girl sees by lantern light is a tall orc. It just scares her. Wood creaks making the orc turn around. The orc tosses a dusty non-hero in a barrel to the ground. 2 more orcs walk up and they coerce the dusty guy to speak. He begs forgiveness trying to save his sister. Our heroes watch and get angrier. On the ready they are suddenly grabbed into something warm and soft: bubble girl. The orc can't find them. The dusty guy honors the tall orc by bowing his head into the mud before being ordered to go. Then the orcs leave. After bubble girl scolds the others for bringing her back here she answers that what she did with her bubble was new for her. Is it like the stories? It's worse. She wanted to forget this place of messed up governing. After some concern they decide to go find our first hero. Through the fog the bubble girl describes missing sites she remembers. They then find 2 orc unconscious and know he's not far. A worn out house, her old home, gets bubble girl's attention. The door swings open and our first hero appears, and he introduces them to the guy the chapter's named after.
The other 3 young group we know best journey to the place of fall where orcs patrol in some reign of tyranny and find Rockie with another guy. Of course Belle is delayed with her compromise of sending a squirrel to send a message back home first.
Also it's interesting that the normal night sky is purple for them, and the comparison is a nice way to slip that in.
We also get it definitively stated that Belle is from the Fall place this chapter, and it's likely related to her recent nightmares.
I'm not sure what Belle's new bubble trick exactly was, but I'd wager it helped their stealth by enabling them to not be seen even when the orc was looking closely for them in the shrubs.
Welp... they found Rockie. He should probably fear his friends' wrath at the start of the next chapter...
Favorite Part: Belle just casually telling a squirrel to deliver her message and it seems to work.
1/28 c3 joeyevans810
I just read your story and noticed your writing style and the way you make it feel realistic. would love to read more of your stories I liked it so much that I want to transform your story into a comic in my own art style.
I have read your first chapter, and I will definitely take out time to read the rest of your chapters...
would love to read more of your stories and I have already read quite a few...
I just read your story and noticed your writing style and the way you make it feel realistic. would love to read more of your stories I liked it so much that I want to transform your story into a comic in my own art style.
I have read your first chapter, and I will definitely take out time to read the rest of your chapters...
would love to read more of your stories and I have already read quite a few...
1/8 c19 Viewer27Man
Our first hero thumps up stairs and crashes into an office to hide for a game of hide-n-seek. In his hiding spot our first hero finds a note about a fall border and help. Our first hero tells the short kid he's going on a special secret mission without needing no bodyguard. The beanie boy checks the letter and reminds our first hero he's stupid and that the place is the worst place on the planet. After the short kid gives our first hero a teary look for lying guilt the bubble girl rips the letter and reinforces her point with look of strictness and fear. The other 2 guys shake their heads. That night our first hero sneaks out, and the beanie boy can't believe it. Our first hero's almost there when the beanie boy smacks then drags him down a steep hill. This erupts into a fist fight to smack our first hero back to his senses while he fights to be a hero. From a tunnel a boy's voice tells them to get lost if they're lost then inquires if his letter was received, which our first hero confirms, then he tells them to wait there. The beanie boy decides to bail and our first hero surprises him by agreeing, but the beanie boy blacks out. At the house the gavel girl shakes the bubble girl awake to inform her the 2 guys are gone to parts unknown. The bubble girl knows what's going on, and the gavel girl talks her into finding them themselves instead of waking up the king. They find and check on the beanie boy. Our first hero hit him, really hit him. He looks to the metal gate on where our first hero went, and requests an end to stupid questions about why. The beanie boy wants to go in to get him, but the bubble girl says no.
Rockie basically forces the next arc to get started in a troublesome and appears to be in an underhanded manner. He's definitely not putting his stubbornness to good use here...Will it turn out well for him? I'm sure he's going to regret it somehow...
Rockie just read a help request letter and interpreted it as a chance to be a hero and left. K.O tried to stop him, but K.O got er...KOed in the attempt. Then Maya talks Belle out of getting help from the adults (another sarcastically 'wise' decision) into finding the boys and they find K.O who explains what he knows.
It's a reasonable assumption that he did, but there is a possibility that Rockie wasn't the one who knocked K.O out. Though if it was someone else that might be a scarier prospect, because then who did? However, this is all hypothetical so I'll have to read to be sure.
They may not be making wise decisions here, but hey unwise decisions are the start of many plots...
I'll have to see how bad Fall Border is from the foreboding warnings.
Favorite Part: Probably Triton's reaction like he was betrayed to realizing he was being lied to and convinced to lie for Rockie. It made Rockie flinch a bit over his dumbest idea (in-story) yet.
Our first hero thumps up stairs and crashes into an office to hide for a game of hide-n-seek. In his hiding spot our first hero finds a note about a fall border and help. Our first hero tells the short kid he's going on a special secret mission without needing no bodyguard. The beanie boy checks the letter and reminds our first hero he's stupid and that the place is the worst place on the planet. After the short kid gives our first hero a teary look for lying guilt the bubble girl rips the letter and reinforces her point with look of strictness and fear. The other 2 guys shake their heads. That night our first hero sneaks out, and the beanie boy can't believe it. Our first hero's almost there when the beanie boy smacks then drags him down a steep hill. This erupts into a fist fight to smack our first hero back to his senses while he fights to be a hero. From a tunnel a boy's voice tells them to get lost if they're lost then inquires if his letter was received, which our first hero confirms, then he tells them to wait there. The beanie boy decides to bail and our first hero surprises him by agreeing, but the beanie boy blacks out. At the house the gavel girl shakes the bubble girl awake to inform her the 2 guys are gone to parts unknown. The bubble girl knows what's going on, and the gavel girl talks her into finding them themselves instead of waking up the king. They find and check on the beanie boy. Our first hero hit him, really hit him. He looks to the metal gate on where our first hero went, and requests an end to stupid questions about why. The beanie boy wants to go in to get him, but the bubble girl says no.
Rockie basically forces the next arc to get started in a troublesome and appears to be in an underhanded manner. He's definitely not putting his stubbornness to good use here...Will it turn out well for him? I'm sure he's going to regret it somehow...
Rockie just read a help request letter and interpreted it as a chance to be a hero and left. K.O tried to stop him, but K.O got er...KOed in the attempt. Then Maya talks Belle out of getting help from the adults (another sarcastically 'wise' decision) into finding the boys and they find K.O who explains what he knows.
It's a reasonable assumption that he did, but there is a possibility that Rockie wasn't the one who knocked K.O out. Though if it was someone else that might be a scarier prospect, because then who did? However, this is all hypothetical so I'll have to read to be sure.
They may not be making wise decisions here, but hey unwise decisions are the start of many plots...
I'll have to see how bad Fall Border is from the foreboding warnings.
Favorite Part: Probably Triton's reaction like he was betrayed to realizing he was being lied to and convinced to lie for Rockie. It made Rockie flinch a bit over his dumbest idea (in-story) yet.
12/18/2024 c18 Viewer27Man
She must run, and breathe, and run some more even over thorns behind a tree. Then there's a presence, and...slash. Been a while since the bubble girl had that dream. Probably means something. Hyper kids run around. The family fixed the site of the big battle. The fidgety girl wants to talk, not about girl stuff, but mentions how the last villain mentioned someone that sounds familiar to the guild master. The pretty boy brings up it was on the egg. As they're figuring this out the guild master has to stop to tell the thumping and slamming to quiet down. The jewels were probably for this accomplice who told the villain about them. Motive? Unknown. They don't bother nobody. After yelling at a crash the guild master they agree on the facts thus far, and the kids make more noise. The guild master marches to the boys' room to find the gavel girl wrestling with our first hero, and winning. Our first hero won't give in, but they all give in when the guild master tells them to take it outside. It's hot, but they got water, so out. The guild master goes down the hall to tell the quiet bubble girl she can talk to him, and that she can skip the session if she's feeling down. Later backyard class is in session that the older ones attend for entertainment. After a discussion of smiling philosophy a black orb zigzags through the air and into our first hero. More pop out to cover his body, and give his eyes a menacing, electric look. The lesson is of 4 classes. Elementals can become their element that's like a 2nd skin, but are not immortal, no magic is, they have weaknesses. The guild master's not one, rather he's a sourcer that consumes and manipulates his element. Substitutes use items. Unknowns are miscellaneous, a lot of dark magic. The lessons will be useful to understand themselves, their enemies, and study for a test to the adults' humor and kids' dismay. The bubble girl want to join the for dinner, but feels bad, and can't face them. Voices shout out insults and blame in the void of a nightmare of the bubble girl to wake her safe in her room. The guild master and his wife talk about her acting off. Her birthday's soon, and that time again, and he should talk to her. Then she knocks and comes in to sleep in their bed for comfort.
This is an informative chapter. They discuss Dollhouse's mysterious cohort with a name that keeps popping up for them: Mister. They get a lesson about the kinds of magics in this world. Last but not least Belle has nightmares where she's running or hearing mean voices.
Not sure why Belle's nightmares became a reason for her to avoid the family for the day. Perhaps the reason for the nightmares will explain when we get that.
The first kind of magics sounds kind of like the Logia fruits from One Piece, and the second sounds kind of like Fairy Tale, if I understand the word 'consume' right. So King eats metal? The 'unknown' reminds me a sort of 'other' class from Hunter x Hunter's system.
Not sure what the words 'arithe' and 'fend' (fend as a noun (best I got is 'shield')) mean.
Favorite Part: The mysteries taking shape. Both about this Mister and Belle's dreams. I'll put that the conversation is interrupted by the kids' noise upstairs as life going on amidst the plot as a second.
She must run, and breathe, and run some more even over thorns behind a tree. Then there's a presence, and...slash. Been a while since the bubble girl had that dream. Probably means something. Hyper kids run around. The family fixed the site of the big battle. The fidgety girl wants to talk, not about girl stuff, but mentions how the last villain mentioned someone that sounds familiar to the guild master. The pretty boy brings up it was on the egg. As they're figuring this out the guild master has to stop to tell the thumping and slamming to quiet down. The jewels were probably for this accomplice who told the villain about them. Motive? Unknown. They don't bother nobody. After yelling at a crash the guild master they agree on the facts thus far, and the kids make more noise. The guild master marches to the boys' room to find the gavel girl wrestling with our first hero, and winning. Our first hero won't give in, but they all give in when the guild master tells them to take it outside. It's hot, but they got water, so out. The guild master goes down the hall to tell the quiet bubble girl she can talk to him, and that she can skip the session if she's feeling down. Later backyard class is in session that the older ones attend for entertainment. After a discussion of smiling philosophy a black orb zigzags through the air and into our first hero. More pop out to cover his body, and give his eyes a menacing, electric look. The lesson is of 4 classes. Elementals can become their element that's like a 2nd skin, but are not immortal, no magic is, they have weaknesses. The guild master's not one, rather he's a sourcer that consumes and manipulates his element. Substitutes use items. Unknowns are miscellaneous, a lot of dark magic. The lessons will be useful to understand themselves, their enemies, and study for a test to the adults' humor and kids' dismay. The bubble girl want to join the for dinner, but feels bad, and can't face them. Voices shout out insults and blame in the void of a nightmare of the bubble girl to wake her safe in her room. The guild master and his wife talk about her acting off. Her birthday's soon, and that time again, and he should talk to her. Then she knocks and comes in to sleep in their bed for comfort.
This is an informative chapter. They discuss Dollhouse's mysterious cohort with a name that keeps popping up for them: Mister. They get a lesson about the kinds of magics in this world. Last but not least Belle has nightmares where she's running or hearing mean voices.
Not sure why Belle's nightmares became a reason for her to avoid the family for the day. Perhaps the reason for the nightmares will explain when we get that.
The first kind of magics sounds kind of like the Logia fruits from One Piece, and the second sounds kind of like Fairy Tale, if I understand the word 'consume' right. So King eats metal? The 'unknown' reminds me a sort of 'other' class from Hunter x Hunter's system.
Not sure what the words 'arithe' and 'fend' (fend as a noun (best I got is 'shield')) mean.
Favorite Part: The mysteries taking shape. Both about this Mister and Belle's dreams. I'll put that the conversation is interrupted by the kids' noise upstairs as life going on amidst the plot as a second.
11/27/2024 c17 Viewer27Man
The short boy is announcing a game of 2 teams of 4, except 1 team is missing the bubble girl who'd rather read. One of the twin girls convinces her via cute begging to attain quiet and gets cheering. They go over rules of half feet, half hands, and the nature, or the wind, decides who goes first. The gavel girl is up first and hits a ball launched from a cannon hard enough to make it catch fire. Members of both teams pursue the ball and the hooded boy catches it with no hands. Hooded throws to winking who kicks to twin, but first intercepts, gavel blocks winking, first shoots, and he scores 4 points for team 1! After they score again twin steals with vines, passes to hooded past gave, vines block first, pass to winking, and gooooooal! Hooded ties it up. Team 1 gets an early lead, but team 2 takes the lead and wins. Then it's story time with the wife: the 3 pigs. The pigs leave their mother and have... familiar names. They opt to be near yet with privacy so we move to the straw, sticks, and stone part. The wolf, played by the sand lady, blows out the basic story and 1 pig to the next's house. The eldest pig asks question that makes the girl wolf mad. Blowing the stone house down doesn't work so she tries the chimney, and lands in a cooking pot. The pigs feast tonight, happily ever after. The short boy is horrified as mama kisses him good night.
We get an interlude of what the kids' activities. We get a sport that seems like soccer that starts with a cannon shot struck like a baseball, magic, sometimes usage of hands, and letting the wind decide who goes first. Then we get story time with Nara, who tells her version of the 3 pigs, and may have accidentally upped the age rating of her story with 2 details to Triton's horror...
Not sure of the rationale for the goals being worth 4 points, especially when the goal is 21, but this is in line with real sports in general that might not have the most rational point values.
It's a fun little interlude that makes it seem more anime/manga-like.
Favorite Part: Letting the wind decide who goes first. Also smacking a ball from a cannon in this sport. I also liked how Triton realized how scary the ending of Nara's story was.
The short boy is announcing a game of 2 teams of 4, except 1 team is missing the bubble girl who'd rather read. One of the twin girls convinces her via cute begging to attain quiet and gets cheering. They go over rules of half feet, half hands, and the nature, or the wind, decides who goes first. The gavel girl is up first and hits a ball launched from a cannon hard enough to make it catch fire. Members of both teams pursue the ball and the hooded boy catches it with no hands. Hooded throws to winking who kicks to twin, but first intercepts, gavel blocks winking, first shoots, and he scores 4 points for team 1! After they score again twin steals with vines, passes to hooded past gave, vines block first, pass to winking, and gooooooal! Hooded ties it up. Team 1 gets an early lead, but team 2 takes the lead and wins. Then it's story time with the wife: the 3 pigs. The pigs leave their mother and have... familiar names. They opt to be near yet with privacy so we move to the straw, sticks, and stone part. The wolf, played by the sand lady, blows out the basic story and 1 pig to the next's house. The eldest pig asks question that makes the girl wolf mad. Blowing the stone house down doesn't work so she tries the chimney, and lands in a cooking pot. The pigs feast tonight, happily ever after. The short boy is horrified as mama kisses him good night.
We get an interlude of what the kids' activities. We get a sport that seems like soccer that starts with a cannon shot struck like a baseball, magic, sometimes usage of hands, and letting the wind decide who goes first. Then we get story time with Nara, who tells her version of the 3 pigs, and may have accidentally upped the age rating of her story with 2 details to Triton's horror...
Not sure of the rationale for the goals being worth 4 points, especially when the goal is 21, but this is in line with real sports in general that might not have the most rational point values.
It's a fun little interlude that makes it seem more anime/manga-like.
Favorite Part: Letting the wind decide who goes first. Also smacking a ball from a cannon in this sport. I also liked how Triton realized how scary the ending of Nara's story was.
11/25/2024 c1 LunaNoir
This story is a captivating and energetic read, combining humor, tension, and vivid character dynamics. The interactions between Rockie and Belle bring a delightful balance of wit and camaraderie, while the setting and plot introduce engaging societal and personal conflicts. Rockie's boisterous optimism and Belle's grounded pragmatism make for a compelling duo, and the story's pacing keeps readers invested from start to finish.
The world-building, with its diverse species and guild dynamics, is rich with potential for visual adaptation. This story would translate beautifully into other mediums like a comic or webtoon, where the vibrant marketplace and dramatic encounters could come to life visually. Furthermore, a motion comic adaptation could elevate the action sequences and emotional beats through dynamic visuals and sound. If you’d like to discuss the possibility of adapting this story, I’d love to connect! I specialize in turning stories into reality as a commission artist, whether it’s through illustrations, comics, or other visual formats. Feel free to reach out via Email or Discord (noir_love) so we can explore the possibilities further!
This story is a captivating and energetic read, combining humor, tension, and vivid character dynamics. The interactions between Rockie and Belle bring a delightful balance of wit and camaraderie, while the setting and plot introduce engaging societal and personal conflicts. Rockie's boisterous optimism and Belle's grounded pragmatism make for a compelling duo, and the story's pacing keeps readers invested from start to finish.
The world-building, with its diverse species and guild dynamics, is rich with potential for visual adaptation. This story would translate beautifully into other mediums like a comic or webtoon, where the vibrant marketplace and dramatic encounters could come to life visually. Furthermore, a motion comic adaptation could elevate the action sequences and emotional beats through dynamic visuals and sound. If you’d like to discuss the possibility of adapting this story, I’d love to connect! I specialize in turning stories into reality as a commission artist, whether it’s through illustrations, comics, or other visual formats. Feel free to reach out via Email or Discord (noir_love) so we can explore the possibilities further!
11/17/2024 c16 Viewer27Man
The king finds himself in court. An elephant is the judge, a rooster prosecutor, frog defense, and a jury of a 6-headed man. They broke stuff, but out of self defense. Since no innocents got hurt they're cleared of the charges, but have to clean and repair the area they broke, and not do it too much. The rooster leaves possibly vowing revenge. The frog is eager to turn the tables on unfairness. The king's older papa wants to talk to him. The king wouldn't say he hates his papa, but he does. With a push of a button on a disk they have a portal to papa's office. Papa talks about trouble they've been involved in, and that he can't keep cleaning them up. Papa wants his son to find some rogues, but the king thinks that was papa's responsibility. The king argues about the actual king's policies of having to protect, paying for damage, and unfair treatment. Papa wants his son to have a better handle on his kids, but they need fun, but the papa says fun's not their job. They discuss the rules and staying in line, that the king resents. Papa warns him about blame going around and that potential future trouble could be worse. King accuses papa of sucking up for luxury. Papa urges the Dove Clan to mingle with society, but the king isn't optimistic about change. The papa argues he wants to make things better. After a final warning the king bitterly replies and leaves. At home our first hero tells the youngest ones and the gavel girl how a doll made someone's head explode. The king and his wife disapprove of the gross talk. The fidgety girl is unconfident and doesn't think she deserved her necklace. Then our first hero praises her for fighting the villain and saving herself, though is told to watch his language in his praise. The one who was cowardly's face preservation excuse causes eyes to roll. A chain our first hero wants must be earned. Some reassurance of the fidgety girl and speaking of the rough world later the kids get excited about a voice from a jukebox of a guy apparently with a bear. The beanie guy thinks he should tell the story over our first hero in a happy moment. One ellipses later someone failed and it's a pity, but the ornaments were returned. A sweet-tasting soul was recovered and gets gulped down before wondering who the Dove Clan are.
It's a resolution chapter dealing with the damage they caused in the big battle and then making Parker feel better. We also get to meet Orishae, King's father, who he has some kind of grudge against.
The court scene paints quite the picture: An elephant judge, a rooster prosecutor, a frog defense, and just when you think that's as crazy as it gets the jury is 1 guy with 6 heads. I'll probably remember that this scene was a thing for a while.
The prejudice against magics is called up again in this chapter. I'll note that it hasn't had a chance to be a major focus in the story so far beyond the first chapter. In this chapter it seems to be more of a side-focus with an implied motivation for some in authority and maybe the rooster.
Orishae's dialogue didn't seem to mean any harm, and seems like he's doing what he can at worst, though King seems trustable with what we've seen him go through so it seems unlikely he'd get mad over the seemingly reasonable dialogue alone, but knowing what context is behind Orishae could change things.
Favorite character? I'd say Maya. The gavel girl's got easily the most recognizable moves that also seem unique from what other series would do with her element. Wood is an interesting element. And she's shown more of her personality quirks than a lot of other characters, particularly from her naming conventions like some weapons/spells are her pets/friends or something.
I'd have a hard time to put any characters as a favorite aside from the first 4, King, and Nara due to their higher amount of screen time. For most of the other characters I don't have much beyond 1 or 2 showings of their combat elements, but that's about it. Aside from King and Nara most characters simply haven't had much time to show how they do things fighting or otherwise. For King and Nara while I have a good amount on their personalities I find their combat style and elements hard to remember since those haven't been emphasized as much as their overwhelming power against their opponents.
That being said for how many characters that have been introduced so quickly I think they were interesting enough to make the fights themselves interesting even while barely knowing the characters yet. It does make the Dove Clan seem quite big too and filled with very different varieties of people.
Favorite Part: Who all's running the court room. The picture of that would be bizarre.
The king finds himself in court. An elephant is the judge, a rooster prosecutor, frog defense, and a jury of a 6-headed man. They broke stuff, but out of self defense. Since no innocents got hurt they're cleared of the charges, but have to clean and repair the area they broke, and not do it too much. The rooster leaves possibly vowing revenge. The frog is eager to turn the tables on unfairness. The king's older papa wants to talk to him. The king wouldn't say he hates his papa, but he does. With a push of a button on a disk they have a portal to papa's office. Papa talks about trouble they've been involved in, and that he can't keep cleaning them up. Papa wants his son to find some rogues, but the king thinks that was papa's responsibility. The king argues about the actual king's policies of having to protect, paying for damage, and unfair treatment. Papa wants his son to have a better handle on his kids, but they need fun, but the papa says fun's not their job. They discuss the rules and staying in line, that the king resents. Papa warns him about blame going around and that potential future trouble could be worse. King accuses papa of sucking up for luxury. Papa urges the Dove Clan to mingle with society, but the king isn't optimistic about change. The papa argues he wants to make things better. After a final warning the king bitterly replies and leaves. At home our first hero tells the youngest ones and the gavel girl how a doll made someone's head explode. The king and his wife disapprove of the gross talk. The fidgety girl is unconfident and doesn't think she deserved her necklace. Then our first hero praises her for fighting the villain and saving herself, though is told to watch his language in his praise. The one who was cowardly's face preservation excuse causes eyes to roll. A chain our first hero wants must be earned. Some reassurance of the fidgety girl and speaking of the rough world later the kids get excited about a voice from a jukebox of a guy apparently with a bear. The beanie guy thinks he should tell the story over our first hero in a happy moment. One ellipses later someone failed and it's a pity, but the ornaments were returned. A sweet-tasting soul was recovered and gets gulped down before wondering who the Dove Clan are.
It's a resolution chapter dealing with the damage they caused in the big battle and then making Parker feel better. We also get to meet Orishae, King's father, who he has some kind of grudge against.
The court scene paints quite the picture: An elephant judge, a rooster prosecutor, a frog defense, and just when you think that's as crazy as it gets the jury is 1 guy with 6 heads. I'll probably remember that this scene was a thing for a while.
The prejudice against magics is called up again in this chapter. I'll note that it hasn't had a chance to be a major focus in the story so far beyond the first chapter. In this chapter it seems to be more of a side-focus with an implied motivation for some in authority and maybe the rooster.
Orishae's dialogue didn't seem to mean any harm, and seems like he's doing what he can at worst, though King seems trustable with what we've seen him go through so it seems unlikely he'd get mad over the seemingly reasonable dialogue alone, but knowing what context is behind Orishae could change things.
Favorite character? I'd say Maya. The gavel girl's got easily the most recognizable moves that also seem unique from what other series would do with her element. Wood is an interesting element. And she's shown more of her personality quirks than a lot of other characters, particularly from her naming conventions like some weapons/spells are her pets/friends or something.
I'd have a hard time to put any characters as a favorite aside from the first 4, King, and Nara due to their higher amount of screen time. For most of the other characters I don't have much beyond 1 or 2 showings of their combat elements, but that's about it. Aside from King and Nara most characters simply haven't had much time to show how they do things fighting or otherwise. For King and Nara while I have a good amount on their personalities I find their combat style and elements hard to remember since those haven't been emphasized as much as their overwhelming power against their opponents.
That being said for how many characters that have been introduced so quickly I think they were interesting enough to make the fights themselves interesting even while barely knowing the characters yet. It does make the Dove Clan seem quite big too and filled with very different varieties of people.
Favorite Part: Who all's running the court room. The picture of that would be bizarre.
11/6/2024 c15 Viewer27Man
The dangerous doll is quite messy with the villain's head. The king says no. He has questions of why the boss villain was just taken out as she stretches and takes in the fresh air. The king and his wife question the dangerous doll to find she loved her creator, she made dead for some goal. The wife is willing to defend her family, but the dangerous doll says she means no harm and to get out of the way. The wife answers by drawing a gold axe hammer while the doll replies by insulting human connections and drawing her blades, and a stare off follows. With a big clash sound the big fight begins. It could use slowmo effects. The dangerous doll promises an army and failure for the family. The wife promises to take the dangerous doll apart piece-by-piece, which the doll thinks is funny. The wife's a mother: the source of her humor. The doll attacks with hair tentacles that are parried by the axe. Once wrapped around the axe it's a tug-o-war that the dangerous doll wins with a whip up, but the wife pulls the doll punch it into a fresh crater. The wife grabs the doll so hard she strikes oil. The doll beep screeches while gushing oil. Then the dangerous doll's hand is burning red. Its pulse gathers reinforcement dolls to kill for the victory. The sand girl bets she can beat more than the 4-armed guy, loser does more chores. They do a pretty good job with sand spikes and bowling skills. Our first hero runs in to zap some dolls, and the hooded boy makes more cubes. The wife meanwhile continues her brawl with the dangerous doll that uses hair tentacles to drum her around and into trees, particularly aiming for the face. The dangerous doll's next attack leaves our first hero crying for mama, but the king knows: mama got this. The dangerous doll starts to monologue about how bad everything will be for her family. Mama responds by punching right through the doll's head. The doll is dead, the area is silent, the doves win and gather to the injured mama. The fidgety girl blows dust to heal her. The mutual questions of being okay follow. Our first hero and the king are impressed. After more of their commentary they notice the place is wrecked with doll corpses everywhere. They will get in trouble, but the family's safe and that's what matters. The kidnapped fidgety girl has some sympathy for the dead villain. The cigar guy suggests they bail before they're busted, but a crowd comes and...they're busted.
The final showdown in the battle against the super-robo dolls: Nara (Mama) vs Danger Danger (the strongest doll). And it's a big brawl of power. Danger Danger seems to have picked the worst possible insults for her survival thus provokes the strength to finish her off. It might have seemed somewhat anti-climactic to some characters, but this was more climactic than the senior members versus the golem of the last arc.
They leave the area broken, but are just a bit too slow getting out undetected.
This chapter seems to solidify not having 1 main character and any character in the dove clan can have the spotlight for as the scene or fight demands, in this case it's Nara's turn. Though Rockie seems to like having screen time even in chapters that aren't about him...
I'm not sure what was exactly going on with the conversation right off the bat where Danger Danger says she won't hurt the family, but Nara insists on fighting nor why Danger Danger killed Dollhouse if she liked him.
I'm currently wondering who won that bet... Will Ivy or Ace be stuck with more chores?
Favorite Part: Nara's powerful brawl with Danger Danger. Also seeing the destroyed area and trying to leave to not get caught, but getting caught anyway.
The dangerous doll is quite messy with the villain's head. The king says no. He has questions of why the boss villain was just taken out as she stretches and takes in the fresh air. The king and his wife question the dangerous doll to find she loved her creator, she made dead for some goal. The wife is willing to defend her family, but the dangerous doll says she means no harm and to get out of the way. The wife answers by drawing a gold axe hammer while the doll replies by insulting human connections and drawing her blades, and a stare off follows. With a big clash sound the big fight begins. It could use slowmo effects. The dangerous doll promises an army and failure for the family. The wife promises to take the dangerous doll apart piece-by-piece, which the doll thinks is funny. The wife's a mother: the source of her humor. The doll attacks with hair tentacles that are parried by the axe. Once wrapped around the axe it's a tug-o-war that the dangerous doll wins with a whip up, but the wife pulls the doll punch it into a fresh crater. The wife grabs the doll so hard she strikes oil. The doll beep screeches while gushing oil. Then the dangerous doll's hand is burning red. Its pulse gathers reinforcement dolls to kill for the victory. The sand girl bets she can beat more than the 4-armed guy, loser does more chores. They do a pretty good job with sand spikes and bowling skills. Our first hero runs in to zap some dolls, and the hooded boy makes more cubes. The wife meanwhile continues her brawl with the dangerous doll that uses hair tentacles to drum her around and into trees, particularly aiming for the face. The dangerous doll's next attack leaves our first hero crying for mama, but the king knows: mama got this. The dangerous doll starts to monologue about how bad everything will be for her family. Mama responds by punching right through the doll's head. The doll is dead, the area is silent, the doves win and gather to the injured mama. The fidgety girl blows dust to heal her. The mutual questions of being okay follow. Our first hero and the king are impressed. After more of their commentary they notice the place is wrecked with doll corpses everywhere. They will get in trouble, but the family's safe and that's what matters. The kidnapped fidgety girl has some sympathy for the dead villain. The cigar guy suggests they bail before they're busted, but a crowd comes and...they're busted.
The final showdown in the battle against the super-robo dolls: Nara (Mama) vs Danger Danger (the strongest doll). And it's a big brawl of power. Danger Danger seems to have picked the worst possible insults for her survival thus provokes the strength to finish her off. It might have seemed somewhat anti-climactic to some characters, but this was more climactic than the senior members versus the golem of the last arc.
They leave the area broken, but are just a bit too slow getting out undetected.
This chapter seems to solidify not having 1 main character and any character in the dove clan can have the spotlight for as the scene or fight demands, in this case it's Nara's turn. Though Rockie seems to like having screen time even in chapters that aren't about him...
I'm not sure what was exactly going on with the conversation right off the bat where Danger Danger says she won't hurt the family, but Nara insists on fighting nor why Danger Danger killed Dollhouse if she liked him.
I'm currently wondering who won that bet... Will Ivy or Ace be stuck with more chores?
Favorite Part: Nara's powerful brawl with Danger Danger. Also seeing the destroyed area and trying to leave to not get caught, but getting caught anyway.
10/15/2024 c14 Viewer27Man
She's not here. A slam jolts the fidgety girl and her guards up. They peek out and leave her to chase shadowy figures. An short guy with art supplies surprises her by thrashing a doll guard, and an armored boy tagged along. The short artist painted over footsteps to find her unnoticed. He gets keys from inside a treasure chest from inside his bag. He tries several of the keys until 1 works. They have to hurry since the ink dummies are probably caught. The armored boy thinks it will be easy, but dolls enter. He charges with battle cry, but swings short, and is knocked into a wall. The short artist draws up a 3D 6-legged ox centaur to charge at them, but they dodge. This gives the fidgety girl her opponent doll: a fight of wisp balls vs an arm beam cannon. After a big boom and dodging a punch the fidgety girl gets her halo, a halo for beams to sizzle the doll. The drawing manages to impale its doll opponent with its horn and shake it off. The fidgety girl summons a shrinking beam from the ceiling that makes a big boom. They're thrown back by the blast, but no dolls are in sight, but they are trying to escape the rubble. The dolls stand, but are pretty broken, and then are folded into cubes. A hooded boy who's hanging around they know is there to help. In another fight scene the winking guy stomps a doll then request to the queen to have this fight. He blasts the 3 dolls with fire attacks, including a hurricane, but can't melt them. After kicks, beams, and dust his doll opponent manages to punch him. However, he's happy; he's got a magic circle and a prayer to a fire lord that summons a fire funnel that can melt the 3 doll opponents. He may have overexerted himself. The king punches a doll out, his family's easily winning, and the villain seems happy. The king stealthily reaches the stealthy villain pins him, and punches him a lot. The villain is still happy. The king asks by giving a blade to the neck him to stop. The villain says he thinks he's won. The king finds him delusional and threatens to beat the location of the fidgety girl out of him. The king gets blasted away by a beam, and the villain monologues about already winning, more dolls, and their superior power. The king resolves to stop the robots, but the villain doesn't like the term robots, but likes his attitude, and presses a button. The hooded guy's and fidgety girl's group notice a tube open and a figure comes out and flies through the ceiling to the battleground. This dangerous doll the villain's masterpiece. The pale woman tries to attack with a needle, but the dangerous doll blocks it, but the needle makes him a little mad, more mad. He doesn't think our heroes have a chance. Meanwhile the rescue team continues their escape, the short artist riding a chalk horse. 2 dolls quietly pursue them only to get blasted by balls of air and lightning bolts resulting in exploding heads. Our first hero and the beanie hero have made contact, and want credit for the kill. The short artist is thankful, and they're here, at the yard of the battle where the villain is monologuing about his dangerous doll again before it claps his head into a mess.
We get a 2-front battle here that at the very end seems like it will consolidate into 1. There's the team that rescues Parker and then the group that fights the dolls and Dollhouse in the yard. At the end the rescue team meets up with Rockie and K.O and it looks like they've reached the main battle area. Dollhouse didn't seem to mind getting beaten up, unleashes his ultimate secret weapon and it kills him. They'll probably still have to fight the super doll.
This chapter overall kind of feels to me like a big superhero comic fight scene with flashy bits here and there.
The effect descriptions for some of the magic attacks are cool, but some I found a bit hard to visualize: notably Parker's shrinking beam.
I'm seeing more now what you were saying about a character explosion earlier. The rescue team consists of 3 new characters: Sketch, Baytah, and Danny. Sketch's abilities are interesting. Baytah seems to be a fool who's easily bested. Danny turned dolls into cubes somehow and the first impression of him is hanging from a ceiling.
The other front only has Champion, requesting to fight himself, using several fire attacks and King beating up Dollhouse. The rest of the combat is described in completely general terms of the family winning from what King can see. We do see Manna do her only described attack so far: a needle that's quick, though Danger Danger is able to catch it. I feel like I'm having some trouble telling who's all fighting from the Dove Clan in this fight scene especially since this is only the first or second time we've seen most of them fight. Of note, I double checked the last chapter finding that Ace was mentioned on a team, but I didn't find his name in the previous chapter or this one beyond dividing up the teams that King declared. I feel even a single mention to tie a name to a power/attack for each combatant of the Dove Clan would clear things up a little with all the characters and give a clearer picture of what the battle between the clan of mages and super robo dolls looks like, and the imagined imagery for that probably would look pretty cool.
It is weird that Dollhouse didn't seem fazed by getting beaten up. It gets weirder since his ultimate weapon smashed his head, and after protecting him too. Not sure if that's somehow part of his plan...My gut says no, my head says yes.
Favorite Part: Of all things to draw to attack a 3D 6-legged ox centaur is crazy. I also like Parker assisting in her own rescue with her own fight.
She's not here. A slam jolts the fidgety girl and her guards up. They peek out and leave her to chase shadowy figures. An short guy with art supplies surprises her by thrashing a doll guard, and an armored boy tagged along. The short artist painted over footsteps to find her unnoticed. He gets keys from inside a treasure chest from inside his bag. He tries several of the keys until 1 works. They have to hurry since the ink dummies are probably caught. The armored boy thinks it will be easy, but dolls enter. He charges with battle cry, but swings short, and is knocked into a wall. The short artist draws up a 3D 6-legged ox centaur to charge at them, but they dodge. This gives the fidgety girl her opponent doll: a fight of wisp balls vs an arm beam cannon. After a big boom and dodging a punch the fidgety girl gets her halo, a halo for beams to sizzle the doll. The drawing manages to impale its doll opponent with its horn and shake it off. The fidgety girl summons a shrinking beam from the ceiling that makes a big boom. They're thrown back by the blast, but no dolls are in sight, but they are trying to escape the rubble. The dolls stand, but are pretty broken, and then are folded into cubes. A hooded boy who's hanging around they know is there to help. In another fight scene the winking guy stomps a doll then request to the queen to have this fight. He blasts the 3 dolls with fire attacks, including a hurricane, but can't melt them. After kicks, beams, and dust his doll opponent manages to punch him. However, he's happy; he's got a magic circle and a prayer to a fire lord that summons a fire funnel that can melt the 3 doll opponents. He may have overexerted himself. The king punches a doll out, his family's easily winning, and the villain seems happy. The king stealthily reaches the stealthy villain pins him, and punches him a lot. The villain is still happy. The king asks by giving a blade to the neck him to stop. The villain says he thinks he's won. The king finds him delusional and threatens to beat the location of the fidgety girl out of him. The king gets blasted away by a beam, and the villain monologues about already winning, more dolls, and their superior power. The king resolves to stop the robots, but the villain doesn't like the term robots, but likes his attitude, and presses a button. The hooded guy's and fidgety girl's group notice a tube open and a figure comes out and flies through the ceiling to the battleground. This dangerous doll the villain's masterpiece. The pale woman tries to attack with a needle, but the dangerous doll blocks it, but the needle makes him a little mad, more mad. He doesn't think our heroes have a chance. Meanwhile the rescue team continues their escape, the short artist riding a chalk horse. 2 dolls quietly pursue them only to get blasted by balls of air and lightning bolts resulting in exploding heads. Our first hero and the beanie hero have made contact, and want credit for the kill. The short artist is thankful, and they're here, at the yard of the battle where the villain is monologuing about his dangerous doll again before it claps his head into a mess.
We get a 2-front battle here that at the very end seems like it will consolidate into 1. There's the team that rescues Parker and then the group that fights the dolls and Dollhouse in the yard. At the end the rescue team meets up with Rockie and K.O and it looks like they've reached the main battle area. Dollhouse didn't seem to mind getting beaten up, unleashes his ultimate secret weapon and it kills him. They'll probably still have to fight the super doll.
This chapter overall kind of feels to me like a big superhero comic fight scene with flashy bits here and there.
The effect descriptions for some of the magic attacks are cool, but some I found a bit hard to visualize: notably Parker's shrinking beam.
I'm seeing more now what you were saying about a character explosion earlier. The rescue team consists of 3 new characters: Sketch, Baytah, and Danny. Sketch's abilities are interesting. Baytah seems to be a fool who's easily bested. Danny turned dolls into cubes somehow and the first impression of him is hanging from a ceiling.
The other front only has Champion, requesting to fight himself, using several fire attacks and King beating up Dollhouse. The rest of the combat is described in completely general terms of the family winning from what King can see. We do see Manna do her only described attack so far: a needle that's quick, though Danger Danger is able to catch it. I feel like I'm having some trouble telling who's all fighting from the Dove Clan in this fight scene especially since this is only the first or second time we've seen most of them fight. Of note, I double checked the last chapter finding that Ace was mentioned on a team, but I didn't find his name in the previous chapter or this one beyond dividing up the teams that King declared. I feel even a single mention to tie a name to a power/attack for each combatant of the Dove Clan would clear things up a little with all the characters and give a clearer picture of what the battle between the clan of mages and super robo dolls looks like, and the imagined imagery for that probably would look pretty cool.
It is weird that Dollhouse didn't seem fazed by getting beaten up. It gets weirder since his ultimate weapon smashed his head, and after protecting him too. Not sure if that's somehow part of his plan...My gut says no, my head says yes.
Favorite Part: Of all things to draw to attack a 3D 6-legged ox centaur is crazy. I also like Parker assisting in her own rescue with her own fight.
10/4/2024 c1 daiki.hinata001
Hey there! Hope you’re doing great!
I just finished reading your story Soar high with Dove Clan on your Fanfiction profile, and I was completely hooked! Your storytelling is incredible, and it sparked an exciting idea—I’d love to turn it into a comic, bringing the action and emotion to life in my unique comic style!
I’ve already started planning how it would flow across pages and panels, and I think this could be something really special. If you're interested, I’d be thrilled to work on this as a commission. I’m a digital artist with a few open spots, and my work focuses on delivering high-quality, visually captivating comics. My rates are fair, and I’m confident you’ll love the final product.
Let me know if this sounds interesting! We can discuss more details and ideas on Discord whenever you're ready.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Here's My Discord: _daiki1
Hey there! Hope you’re doing great!
I just finished reading your story Soar high with Dove Clan on your Fanfiction profile, and I was completely hooked! Your storytelling is incredible, and it sparked an exciting idea—I’d love to turn it into a comic, bringing the action and emotion to life in my unique comic style!
I’ve already started planning how it would flow across pages and panels, and I think this could be something really special. If you're interested, I’d be thrilled to work on this as a commission. I’m a digital artist with a few open spots, and my work focuses on delivering high-quality, visually captivating comics. My rates are fair, and I’m confident you’ll love the final product.
Let me know if this sounds interesting! We can discuss more details and ideas on Discord whenever you're ready.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Here's My Discord: _daiki1
9/25/2024 c13 Viewer27Man
The villain orders his dolls forward while the king divides them up for his group while he gets the villain. The sand girl sand punches one to get kicked by another into another that tries to slash her. She gets into a sword fight with this one. The sky diver shoots a doll back with his pink gun, but the doll is thrown back at him. After a collision of their shots he pulls out his purple gun only to get it smashed into his chin only to fire it into his opponent that did so in a pew-filled finishing blow. A doll swish dashes to him and kicks his jaw and it hurts. He punches the jaw and it hurts his hand. The sky diver could use help. The bowtie guy is a little tied up by a whip and then hurled. He generates pink rope to slingshot back and attacks with a binding pink sheet. The sky diver finds poking the dolls' eyes doesn't work so he tries his purple gun instead but the blasts are absorbed, and he's impressed. He then uses his red gun with a shot too strong to be absorbed to make the doll go boom. The sand lady takes a cut, but makes her foe bleed oil. She then upper cuts it thrice and impales it with a sand spike. She then sand spike slaps the next doll to glitches. Then the doll in the pink sheet blasts its way out only for the sand lady to stomp its face to pieces. She's not having fun quite yet. Innocents bail with many of our junior heroes on evacuation duty. Our first hero wants to fight in the big battle, and refuses to help get the evacuees to safety. The others argue with him over this when there's a bam. A doll slammed his face into the ground. The beanie guy wind punches the doll into the air only to get an arrow to the shoulder. The gavel girl uses a giant wooden hand to pinch the doll, but it's able to break free. The water girl forces the doll to the ground with a waterfall from a bubble. Our first hero slides under the doll and slashes its back with a lightning bolt. Then they beam each other, our first hero using static. The gavel girl throws her trusty gavel only for the doll to catch, spin it, and block a bolt with it. The gavel girl is concerned for her gavel's safety so our first hero jumps on it and slashes the doll's face. He blocks a gavel strike, stabbing with another strike demanding the gavel back for his sister. Then he's supposed to duck when an air ball blows through the doll's chest destroying it. Our first hero complains to the beanie guy about stealing his kill, but it was personal. The bubble girl argues for safety. They mostly agree, but our first hero peeks back.
A fight chapter with 2 fights. We get Ivy, Alche, and Ricky vs some dolls and the four junior members starring in the previous arc to fight one when they try to help with evacuations (except Rockie who wants to fight).
The recent chapters seem to have docked main character status the four had in the first few chapters despite them being the first ones portrayed. The story seems to be more about the Dove Clan itself and each chapter can revolve around whoever's relevant for the situation. However, it's still possible they are or at least Rockie will maintain that status depending on what he does this arc. Rockie seems to want glory/thrills over saving people, and that Maya seems to want her gavel over Rockie.
Ivy, Alche, and Ricky fight a bunch of dolls in various clothing. The dolls are tricked out and powerful robots, but overall no match for the magics fighting them. The dolls don't stand out much beyond there being several of them, but I think they stand out enough within the fight scene. I like how the fights between the three of them blend over to the fights of the others a bit rather than plain 1-on-1 fights.
The Rockie, K.O, Maya, and Belle fight a doll that's pretty strong for them. Rockie's attacks seem the most effective against it while Maya's seem the least effective. Though, K.O gets the KO...
Looks like we'll have more of the fights against the dolls and their maker to look forward to in the next chapter or so.
Favorite Part: Maya wanting Rockie to be gentle with Dustin: her trusty gavel. Kind of a silly thing right now. I also liked how the fights blended over making no one in a true safe zone.
The villain orders his dolls forward while the king divides them up for his group while he gets the villain. The sand girl sand punches one to get kicked by another into another that tries to slash her. She gets into a sword fight with this one. The sky diver shoots a doll back with his pink gun, but the doll is thrown back at him. After a collision of their shots he pulls out his purple gun only to get it smashed into his chin only to fire it into his opponent that did so in a pew-filled finishing blow. A doll swish dashes to him and kicks his jaw and it hurts. He punches the jaw and it hurts his hand. The sky diver could use help. The bowtie guy is a little tied up by a whip and then hurled. He generates pink rope to slingshot back and attacks with a binding pink sheet. The sky diver finds poking the dolls' eyes doesn't work so he tries his purple gun instead but the blasts are absorbed, and he's impressed. He then uses his red gun with a shot too strong to be absorbed to make the doll go boom. The sand lady takes a cut, but makes her foe bleed oil. She then upper cuts it thrice and impales it with a sand spike. She then sand spike slaps the next doll to glitches. Then the doll in the pink sheet blasts its way out only for the sand lady to stomp its face to pieces. She's not having fun quite yet. Innocents bail with many of our junior heroes on evacuation duty. Our first hero wants to fight in the big battle, and refuses to help get the evacuees to safety. The others argue with him over this when there's a bam. A doll slammed his face into the ground. The beanie guy wind punches the doll into the air only to get an arrow to the shoulder. The gavel girl uses a giant wooden hand to pinch the doll, but it's able to break free. The water girl forces the doll to the ground with a waterfall from a bubble. Our first hero slides under the doll and slashes its back with a lightning bolt. Then they beam each other, our first hero using static. The gavel girl throws her trusty gavel only for the doll to catch, spin it, and block a bolt with it. The gavel girl is concerned for her gavel's safety so our first hero jumps on it and slashes the doll's face. He blocks a gavel strike, stabbing with another strike demanding the gavel back for his sister. Then he's supposed to duck when an air ball blows through the doll's chest destroying it. Our first hero complains to the beanie guy about stealing his kill, but it was personal. The bubble girl argues for safety. They mostly agree, but our first hero peeks back.
A fight chapter with 2 fights. We get Ivy, Alche, and Ricky vs some dolls and the four junior members starring in the previous arc to fight one when they try to help with evacuations (except Rockie who wants to fight).
The recent chapters seem to have docked main character status the four had in the first few chapters despite them being the first ones portrayed. The story seems to be more about the Dove Clan itself and each chapter can revolve around whoever's relevant for the situation. However, it's still possible they are or at least Rockie will maintain that status depending on what he does this arc. Rockie seems to want glory/thrills over saving people, and that Maya seems to want her gavel over Rockie.
Ivy, Alche, and Ricky fight a bunch of dolls in various clothing. The dolls are tricked out and powerful robots, but overall no match for the magics fighting them. The dolls don't stand out much beyond there being several of them, but I think they stand out enough within the fight scene. I like how the fights between the three of them blend over to the fights of the others a bit rather than plain 1-on-1 fights.
The Rockie, K.O, Maya, and Belle fight a doll that's pretty strong for them. Rockie's attacks seem the most effective against it while Maya's seem the least effective. Though, K.O gets the KO...
Looks like we'll have more of the fights against the dolls and their maker to look forward to in the next chapter or so.
Favorite Part: Maya wanting Rockie to be gentle with Dustin: her trusty gavel. Kind of a silly thing right now. I also liked how the fights blended over making no one in a true safe zone.