for The Lion Princess2/7/2017 c7 
5marzmez
You now have one very impatient follower. How is this going to be resolved? I am quite glad the sisters know now. Four heads are better than one and all that. Although I haven't reviewed in the last few chapters there were some minor errors with words, but I was too impatient to keep reading I didn't point them out. Let me know if you want me to go back and let you know where they are.
5marzmezYou now have one very impatient follower. How is this going to be resolved? I am quite glad the sisters know now. Four heads are better than one and all that. Although I haven't reviewed in the last few chapters there were some minor errors with words, but I was too impatient to keep reading I didn't point them out. Let me know if you want me to go back and let you know where they are.
2/7/2017 c2 marzmez
I like the interaction between the royal family members. Very entertaining. One correction: while waiting for the prince to arrive you describe Rea's hands as being "sturdy". Did you mean "steady"?
I like the interaction between the royal family members. Very entertaining. One correction: while waiting for the prince to arrive you describe Rea's hands as being "sturdy". Did you mean "steady"?
2/7/2017 c1 marzmez
Very nice! I am excited for this series! You have given it a great start. Have you ever read "The Ordinary Princess"? Delightful tale! Your youngest reminded me of it.
One correction you might want to make: when speaking of Nat in relation to Larissa's beauty you used the word "contract" when you probably meant "contrast".
Keep up the good work!
Very nice! I am excited for this series! You have given it a great start. Have you ever read "The Ordinary Princess"? Delightful tale! Your youngest reminded me of it.
One correction you might want to make: when speaking of Nat in relation to Larissa's beauty you used the word "contract" when you probably meant "contrast".
Keep up the good work!
2/2/2017 c7 Just Me
Awesome entrance to the palace, carriages and horses r too mainstream
Love it! Especially when Aurelius uses his tail to hit Cadmus
Excited to find out what happens next now that the sisters know
Awesome entrance to the palace, carriages and horses r too mainstream
Love it! Especially when Aurelius uses his tail to hit Cadmus
Excited to find out what happens next now that the sisters know
2/1/2017 c7 Guest
Too. Good. The queen in her is starting to battle its way out. Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!
-Katie
Too. Good. The queen in her is starting to battle its way out. Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!
-Katie
1/22/2017 c6 Guest
Agh! She's riding him into the palace! Brilliant! She needs to lose that prince, though, he doesn't treat her like a queen whose respect he wants, more like a girl with a great dowry. Auri should eat him.
-Katie
Agh! She's riding him into the palace! Brilliant! She needs to lose that prince, though, he doesn't treat her like a queen whose respect he wants, more like a girl with a great dowry. Auri should eat him.
-Katie
1/21/2017 c6 C. M. Brighid Bachleda
Can't wait for the reaction of a lion walking beside or carrying the princess on his back...
Can't wait for the reaction of a lion walking beside or carrying the princess on his back...
1/18/2017 c5 Guest
Breaks my heart...but so well done! I can only imagine what her sisters will say!
Breaks my heart...but so well done! I can only imagine what her sisters will say!
1/4/2017 c4 Guest
This is getting so complex with subplots! Loving every word!
This is getting so complex with subplots! Loving every word!
12/30/2016 c3 Guest
Ahhhh but I want more! So excited!
Ahhhh but I want more! So excited!
12/29/2016 c3 You'llNeverKnow
I am disliking Cadmus more and more and now that I am certain he's not just a lion, I am shipping them even more
I am disliking Cadmus more and more and now that I am certain he's not just a lion, I am shipping them even more
12/28/2016 c3 Just Me
I love your stories! I cant wait to read more
I am definitely certain I don't like Cadmus, there's jst something about him
Is the lion the missing son? I really like the lion for Reanna, despite not knowing a lot about him XD
I love your stories! I cant wait to read more
I am definitely certain I don't like Cadmus, there's jst something about him
Is the lion the missing son? I really like the lion for Reanna, despite not knowing a lot about him XD