for Statues2/8/2017 c2 
9DaPeopleEaters9
Oh my, didn't expect that. I was wondering why she was so quick to call the police.
Anyway, there are a few format things that probably need some touching up, like line breaks in the middle of sentences. Also, I know this story is less about the characters and more about the plot, but it doesn't hurt to flesh out the characters anyway. You've got a pretty good story so far and I'll be here for the next update.
9DaPeopleEaters9Oh my, didn't expect that. I was wondering why she was so quick to call the police.
Anyway, there are a few format things that probably need some touching up, like line breaks in the middle of sentences. Also, I know this story is less about the characters and more about the plot, but it doesn't hurt to flesh out the characters anyway. You've got a pretty good story so far and I'll be here for the next update.
1/11/2017 c1 DaPeopleEaters9
Hopefully you'll expand on this and make it actually fit into the horror category. I'm intrigued though, so I'll follow and see what's next.
Hopefully you'll expand on this and make it actually fit into the horror category. I'm intrigued though, so I'll follow and see what's next.