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1/23/2017 c1 70BradytheJust
Wow...

I don't know how you do it, but you manage to pack so much into a few words. "Every miracle demands a payment, some greater than others."
Perfect... the magic of a fallen star or of a God... it all demands a price.

Everything from the setting to the innocent nature of the children was just so wonderfully written. Amazing job!
1/23/2017 c1 1Amelia Shepperd
This has a somewhat haunting/mystic quality to it that a lot of stories aim for and miss completely. It has an old feeling to it, like a Grimm's fairytale with sci-fi subject matter (although the end result a bit too New-Agey for my personal taste). The writing style is good and enjoyable.

Needs correcting: "*Out here, in the darkness" (you're missing a space)

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