for Simple Pleasures1/28/2017 c1 
70BradytheJust
Once again my friend, you have really made me think.
Your word choice was perfect including the lines:
"To welcome the simplest pleasures is much like inviting a demon into your bed"
"Enticing but with the potential to be lethal"
"Countless fruits burst with reckless abandon on his tongue"
"Tapping erratic patterns on whatever he could lay his hands on"
You manage to transport me into each and every story, and my heart is pounding right now. Keep it up my friend! :D
70BradytheJustOnce again my friend, you have really made me think.
Your word choice was perfect including the lines:
"To welcome the simplest pleasures is much like inviting a demon into your bed"
"Enticing but with the potential to be lethal"
"Countless fruits burst with reckless abandon on his tongue"
"Tapping erratic patterns on whatever he could lay his hands on"
You manage to transport me into each and every story, and my heart is pounding right now. Keep it up my friend! :D
1/27/2017 c1 Fib112358
Loved the suspense at the start of this as Ren waits, and the tension that Holland brings as the reader wonders whats going to happen.
Loved the suspense at the start of this as Ren waits, and the tension that Holland brings as the reader wonders whats going to happen.