for Sunrise Sensation10/15/2018 c1 
36Anna Christie
This is beautiful, Anna. It captures everything about an early morning walk to me. Very lovely.
36Anna ChristieThis is beautiful, Anna. It captures everything about an early morning walk to me. Very lovely.
7/1/2017 c1 8LorrahBear
This is wonderful! So relaxing, and full of imagery, which is extra impressive for a haiku. Great job!
8LorrahBearThis is wonderful! So relaxing, and full of imagery, which is extra impressive for a haiku. Great job!
2/28/2017 c1 9The Old Dude of the Mountain
Interesting and unique perspective on sunlight beams, as I've never seen a "perilous beauty" take on it. I do note that, unlike most haiku I've read, it seems to flow like a unified sentence more than like a haiku. Could be a problem with me, though, so don't mind that much.
9The Old Dude of the MountainInteresting and unique perspective on sunlight beams, as I've never seen a "perilous beauty" take on it. I do note that, unlike most haiku I've read, it seems to flow like a unified sentence more than like a haiku. Could be a problem with me, though, so don't mind that much.
2/15/2017 c1 Guest
Well done, very clear and beautiful. Nature made a vision for the reader. As always your haiku is perfect
Well done, very clear and beautiful. Nature made a vision for the reader. As always your haiku is perfect