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2/11/2019 c1 169MallowsWins
Interesting personification of nature, very startling. I like it.
10/15/2018 c1 36Anna Christie
This is beautiful, Anna. It captures everything about an early morning walk to me. Very lovely.
5/17/2018 c1 18Sir Scott
Beautiful. Beauty can be blinding.
~Sir Scott
7/1/2017 c1 8LorrahBear
This is wonderful! So relaxing, and full of imagery, which is extra impressive for a haiku. Great job!
5/6/2017 c1 10njdevin529
Beautiful. Your love for nature shines through this poem!
2/28/2017 c1 9The Old Dude of the Mountain
Interesting and unique perspective on sunlight beams, as I've never seen a "perilous beauty" take on it. I do note that, unlike most haiku I've read, it seems to flow like a unified sentence more than like a haiku. Could be a problem with me, though, so don't mind that much.
2/17/2017 c1 167nickyO
Lovely words to create a lovely image to start the day. Thank you!
2/15/2017 c1 Guest
Well done, very clear and beautiful. Nature made a vision for the reader. As always your haiku is perfect
2/15/2017 c1 68Dreamarcher
I can see this! Thanks for sharing your vision!

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