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6/25/2017 c1 10Jimli
Impactful, very descriptive. In a story so short, make sure not to burden it with physical description.

Intriguing; it really left me wanting more, though. :)

Jimli
2/25/2017 c1 11CoffeeWritingAddiction
The writing is great for how short this is.
I can create an image in my head of what's happening from the way you described everything.
Lovely work.

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