for Short Stories:6/25/2017 c1 
10Jimli
Impactful, very descriptive. In a story so short, make sure not to burden it with physical description.
Intriguing; it really left me wanting more, though. :)
Jimli
10JimliImpactful, very descriptive. In a story so short, make sure not to burden it with physical description.
Intriguing; it really left me wanting more, though. :)
Jimli
2/25/2017 c1 11CoffeeWritingAddiction
The writing is great for how short this is.
I can create an image in my head of what's happening from the way you described everything.
Lovely work.
11CoffeeWritingAddictionThe writing is great for how short this is.
I can create an image in my head of what's happening from the way you described everything.
Lovely work.