for someone you used to love4/14/2019 c4 
7MagicInTheMundane
I’ve recently lost someone I never thought would walk out of my life or betray me, and God, you’ve put life to the words I didn’t even know I wanted to say. Thank you so much.
7MagicInTheMundaneI’ve recently lost someone I never thought would walk out of my life or betray me, and God, you’ve put life to the words I didn’t even know I wanted to say. Thank you so much.
4/14/2019 c2 MagicInTheMundane
This poem is painful in its raw human portrayal of grief and loss of love. It made me ache and hurt just reading it. Fantastic
This poem is painful in its raw human portrayal of grief and loss of love. It made me ache and hurt just reading it. Fantastic
3/8/2017 c2 rust phoenix
i'm going through a similar situation right now. it hurts, and you show that hurt well. it's hard, that mix of affection and pain, and the contradictory impulse to try to get closer and to distance yourself when things start going bad. it's hard to know what goes on in another person's mind.
i'm going through a similar situation right now. it hurts, and you show that hurt well. it's hard, that mix of affection and pain, and the contradictory impulse to try to get closer and to distance yourself when things start going bad. it's hard to know what goes on in another person's mind.
3/8/2017 c1 rust phoenix
i love the details in this piece. the emotion feels so raw and honest, but there's also a delicacy to the writing. the sense of ambivalence comes through really artfully.
i love the details in this piece. the emotion feels so raw and honest, but there's also a delicacy to the writing. the sense of ambivalence comes through really artfully.