for Your Angel3/3/2017 c1 
11CoffeeWritingAddiction
I'm usually not one to favor stories written in the second person, but I find this one to be an exception.
The writing is well done; and it looks like a lot of hard work has been put into this.
It seems natural, unlike most (second person) stories.
I can really feel that I'm in the story while I'm reading this.
I think you did an exceedingly brilliant job with this work.
11CoffeeWritingAddictionI'm usually not one to favor stories written in the second person, but I find this one to be an exception.
The writing is well done; and it looks like a lot of hard work has been put into this.
It seems natural, unlike most (second person) stories.
I can really feel that I'm in the story while I'm reading this.
I think you did an exceedingly brilliant job with this work.