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3/15/2017 c1 2PeachesForMe
This is a great piece! The language flows very nicely. I love the line "we abhor love because we fear pain". Overall, this story is intriguing and the points you make are very convincing! Great job.
3/14/2017 c1 13Shailaputri
The overall concept is really nice. I like it. But I have second thoughts towards this.. /and they will see what you have to offer/
How it could be possible to love someone based on what they would offer. It will become business I guess..
Other than that I enjoyed reading it. Appreciate it.

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