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12/17/2017 c1 9TheBeastlyPrincess
My first thought is that, 'a little' should be bumped to the second line becuase I think it would read better.
I loved the ending, it really draws your metaphor together :)
9/30/2017 c1 19Ckh
I like the comparison between writing and planting strawberries. What can I say, it fits. Writing is a delicate art and when we compare our work to the work of others, we find ourselves falling short.

The line about planting seeds is a great one. We all know true originality kinda doesn't exist, what with billions of people around the globe and billions more in the past. What really matters is execution, and its comforting to see execution getting recognition - because it gives us hope for our unoriginal ideas too.

Don't sweat it over waiting for creativity to come knocking. Good works are often inspired by random floating ideas, gold dust if you may call it, and really, luck plays an important factor too.

Favorite line segment (thats a thing now?):
"mulch after the first frosts arrive"

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