5/2/2021 c1 HeyCharles
I am amazed with your storytelling, great job! I will recommend this book to my friends. And by the way, NovelStar is currently expanding, you should publish your book there because a lot of readers will love your work.

8/17/2018 c15 2Knorles
What does happen next?

11/23/2017 c13 Guest
Please moreee

7/24/2017 c11 3Typhlosion-777
I vote Felix and addison

7/22/2017 c10 Guest
I think I'm leaning a lot more to Kellan at the moment! Seems to have a lot more about him than Felix! Hopefully soon we'll get to see a bit more the Felix! She's so awkward I love it!

7/14/2017 c9 the.broken.string
Ah shucks. I was just rooting for her and Kellan

7/2/2017 c8 Bacca Assassin
Not bad. A few errors here and there, but ultimately I enjoy your writing and the story. With just a little refinement you'll be golden. Keep it up, I look forward to reading the next chapters.

6/14/2017 c7 4scarlet53
I loved it