for The World Under Our Feet2/23/2020 c2 Lovingdead
I very much enjoyed the characters, the inside thoughts and feelings, they were raw and flawed. Not firm but shaking. As the made their way through the story.
I very much enjoyed the characters, the inside thoughts and feelings, they were raw and flawed. Not firm but shaking. As the made their way through the story.
4/2/2017 c1 animelurver
Loved the way you got across to the reader the detail of each character. How you got to know them through mutual emotion. But most of all the message to never give up.
Loved the way you got across to the reader the detail of each character. How you got to know them through mutual emotion. But most of all the message to never give up.
4/2/2017 c1 BetaBoater
I like the way you wrote this! I didn't expect to get drawn in, but I did :) i hope theres more? Unless im dumb and this is a oneshot XD
I like the way you wrote this! I didn't expect to get drawn in, but I did :) i hope theres more? Unless im dumb and this is a oneshot XD