for Colette's Covenant5/11/2017 c5 AzulFire
This is almost too good. Your story breathes originality. I can't wait to see where Colette's goes. This is great. I'm a fan. Also the world you created is refreshing and exciting. All your characters are likable. Fervent is the cutest. He's so loving and humble. I almost don't want him to be romantically in love with Colette, but I feel he is. I also like that the pace is perfect , not too slow that I lose interest yet not rushed. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to hear Nicholas's back story!
This is almost too good. Your story breathes originality. I can't wait to see where Colette's goes. This is great. I'm a fan. Also the world you created is refreshing and exciting. All your characters are likable. Fervent is the cutest. He's so loving and humble. I almost don't want him to be romantically in love with Colette, but I feel he is. I also like that the pace is perfect , not too slow that I lose interest yet not rushed. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to hear Nicholas's back story!
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