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7/11/2003 c1 13avidelecteur
Cute story. On a more negative note, it hardly has a definitive ending. Also, I personally would prefer it if you described your "grasses" and "tree" more but kept it from his point of view so that the reader actually had to think somewhat. And Kleenex doesn't look very much like grass. I really like the idea of the story though. If you want, I can give you more suggestions if you e-mail me at , but they are mostly picky little things, so yeah, you might not care.
10/26/2002 c1 2Tigress of the Night
actually, I DO have something to say. this story is good but YOU *NEVER* update! GRRR!
7/21/2001 c1 4Nakato Rune
I like it, it's cute and imaginative. The only unexplained thing that I could see was: What was the hollow log that he dove into? A pen cap, perhaps?

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