for vindictive2/20/2018 c1 
16John-the-H-is-silent
The emotion really comes to life. You capture that vindictive nature well with how you set the poem up to end that way.
16John-the-H-is-silentThe emotion really comes to life. You capture that vindictive nature well with how you set the poem up to end that way.
6/2/2017 c1 12LittleAlchemist
This was very entertaining and chilling. Good work! I enjoyed the techniques you employed with wording and rhyme and that last paragraph especially.
12LittleAlchemistThis was very entertaining and chilling. Good work! I enjoyed the techniques you employed with wording and rhyme and that last paragraph especially.