for rain drops7/15/2017 c1 
1jkleeberger22
Interesting concept! I like the way you demonstrated that sorrow can bring growth like the rain brings growth and new life. Describing the rain as the tears of the earth made that analogy very effective. This poem was a nice, fresh take on something that is often seen as something depressing (storms) by showing it as something that is bittersweet.
1jkleeberger22Interesting concept! I like the way you demonstrated that sorrow can bring growth like the rain brings growth and new life. Describing the rain as the tears of the earth made that analogy very effective. This poem was a nice, fresh take on something that is often seen as something depressing (storms) by showing it as something that is bittersweet.
7/7/2017 c1 1Mysteric
Hey, your friend Mysteric here! I just read this and it's so moving! Though you probably didn't notice, but there's something goofy with how the text came out. All the lines have, "p style"text-align: center;"" before it. So maybe you can try to retype then resubmit.
But again, this poem is awesome and so beautiful...
1MystericHey, your friend Mysteric here! I just read this and it's so moving! Though you probably didn't notice, but there's something goofy with how the text came out. All the lines have, "p style"text-align: center;"" before it. So maybe you can try to retype then resubmit.
But again, this poem is awesome and so beautiful...