
6/18/2017 c1
5SimonClemens
Nice concept.
Problem though, it says "you" when it should have said "your" s few times, a little editing can fix that.
I would argue that most emotions are enemies, personally.

Nice concept.
Problem though, it says "you" when it should have said "your" s few times, a little editing can fix that.
I would argue that most emotions are enemies, personally.
6/18/2017 c1
2KyarKomodo
Scary~ I like the personification, makes Panic seem like less of an emotion, and more of a person, some sort've walking nightmare! Good stuff~ :] I enjoyed it.

Scary~ I like the personification, makes Panic seem like less of an emotion, and more of a person, some sort've walking nightmare! Good stuff~ :] I enjoyed it.