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7/2/2017 c1 1KaeNicole
I actually really like this story and I think you portrayed the subject of heartbreak really well. I know what it feels like from first hand experience and I'm guessing you know what it feels like too based on how well you wrote this. I actually felt really bad for the main character and the two children that Diana left behind. Are you going to continue writing this? I would love to see more. :-)
6/27/2017 c1 I am inactive
The summary sounds really good. It's a pity about the way the page turned out, but it's not your fault.
6/24/2017 c1 7clairisa23
Very good intro to your bio very honest. But what happend to your page maybe something went wrong. Fictionpress does that sometimes that's why I typed my docs manuelly or copy & past them. But anyway I can't wait for the next chapter:).

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