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18Pennie Wagner
Whoot!
Also, quick note. There were small mistakes dotting here and there throughout the entire story. On more than one occasion, you had badly misspelled words or words in wrong places/orders. Other times it seemed like entire sections of sentences we're missing and what you had was merged together. A few times you even had the last sentence in a paragraph cut off completely and stop, jumping to the next.
In either this chapter (or the last, but I think this one), you replaced Naomi's name with Allenia. Which, let me tell you, confused the heck out of me.
But, you know, it happens. No one's perfect and we all make mistakes. Me included. I was just too absorbed into the story to stop enough to point out each and every mistake.
Either way though, it was a wonderful short story and I dearly enjoyed it. Thank you for the read and I will *definitely* be waiting for more in this trilogy-maybe-series!
18Pennie WagnerWhoot!
Also, quick note. There were small mistakes dotting here and there throughout the entire story. On more than one occasion, you had badly misspelled words or words in wrong places/orders. Other times it seemed like entire sections of sentences we're missing and what you had was merged together. A few times you even had the last sentence in a paragraph cut off completely and stop, jumping to the next.
In either this chapter (or the last, but I think this one), you replaced Naomi's name with Allenia. Which, let me tell you, confused the heck out of me.
But, you know, it happens. No one's perfect and we all make mistakes. Me included. I was just too absorbed into the story to stop enough to point out each and every mistake.
Either way though, it was a wonderful short story and I dearly enjoyed it. Thank you for the read and I will *definitely* be waiting for more in this trilogy-maybe-series!
8/10/2017 c12 Pennie Wagner
Lol, it's cool. Been there and done that. On to yet another crazy family meeting!
Lol, it's cool. Been there and done that. On to yet another crazy family meeting!
8/10/2017 c11 Pennie Wagner
It's all cool and I have to agree. A lot of shit went down in this chapter. Thanks. Moving right along...
It's all cool and I have to agree. A lot of shit went down in this chapter. Thanks. Moving right along...
8/10/2017 c10 Pennie Wagner
Yes.
Yes.
Just FUCKING YES (plz excuse my language)!
I literally screamed with laughter at the SURPRISE part and almost died choking on it with the "Surviving Your 1st Date"!
Thank you...Oh, Jesus, I needed that laugh...
Yes.
Yes.
Just FUCKING YES (plz excuse my language)!
I literally screamed with laughter at the SURPRISE part and almost died choking on it with the "Surviving Your 1st Date"!
Thank you...Oh, Jesus, I needed that laugh...
8/9/2017 c9 Pennie Wagner
Maybe the Mop comment?
Also now I REALLY have to stop. Later...ugh, don't want to though
Maybe the Mop comment?
Also now I REALLY have to stop. Later...ugh, don't want to though
8/8/2017 c4 Pennie Wagner
Lol, this was a short chapter, but it's cool. Unfortunately though, it's all I have time for. Thanks for the cute little chapter!
Lol, this was a short chapter, but it's cool. Unfortunately though, it's all I have time for. Thanks for the cute little chapter!
8/8/2017 c3 Pennie Wagner
You have NO idea how badly I was laughing this ENTIRE chapter! I loooooved it! And now I'm going to squeal like a little kid and move right on to the next one!
You have NO idea how badly I was laughing this ENTIRE chapter! I loooooved it! And now I'm going to squeal like a little kid and move right on to the next one!
7/26/2017 c2 Pennie Wagner
This is *very* Interesting...ugh, I wish I had more time to read!
Thanks for the chapter. Super curious as to what a 'harold' is. Dragons, I have down, lol. Also I think it's a dick move (of the story universe) that a dragon can't have a half-human child. Like, wtf? People love who they love.
Anyway, the next time I get to read, I'll be sure to do. Thanks again!
This is *very* Interesting...ugh, I wish I had more time to read!
Thanks for the chapter. Super curious as to what a 'harold' is. Dragons, I have down, lol. Also I think it's a dick move (of the story universe) that a dragon can't have a half-human child. Like, wtf? People love who they love.
Anyway, the next time I get to read, I'll be sure to do. Thanks again!
7/23/2017 c1 Pennie Wagner
Wow. This was really great. I'm *very* excited to see where this is going to go (most notably what sort of magical being Sam is!). Unfortunately though, I don't have much free time outside of my writing time. Even so, I'll do my best to slowly but steadily help me get through the rest of this story.
Thanks for sharing!
Wow. This was really great. I'm *very* excited to see where this is going to go (most notably what sort of magical being Sam is!). Unfortunately though, I don't have much free time outside of my writing time. Even so, I'll do my best to slowly but steadily help me get through the rest of this story.
Thanks for sharing!