for Story Starts1/3/2019 c5 Elcaldwell
I really enjoyed reading these ideas. I couldn’t help but come up with my own start or continuation after reading each one.
I really enjoyed reading these ideas. I couldn’t help but come up with my own start or continuation after reading each one.
8/15/2017 c5 
21Marina x Machina
IDk how I feel about the name Otaktay...it sounds kinda wacky to me but maybe it has a very serious history attached to it that my ignorant uncultured mind is unaware of. Good luck! I would love to see the stories from chapter two and three serialized.
21Marina x MachinaIDk how I feel about the name Otaktay...it sounds kinda wacky to me but maybe it has a very serious history attached to it that my ignorant uncultured mind is unaware of. Good luck! I would love to see the stories from chapter two and three serialized.
8/15/2017 c3 Marina x Machina
I like this idea too (haha can you guess I like thrillers/mysteries/suspense?). Maybe she has retrograde amnesia, she's on the run from some killer, has a devious twin sister, etc. This looks good!
I like this idea too (haha can you guess I like thrillers/mysteries/suspense?). Maybe she has retrograde amnesia, she's on the run from some killer, has a devious twin sister, etc. This looks good!
8/15/2017 c2 Marina x Machina
I would read this one if you serialized it. I really like it and your writing style. Though the man is a kind of bad representation of the gay community - you can read my story How to Be the Best Internet Writer in the World: You Can Write Slash and Be Homophobic for more details - so I'd prefer it if he teased the main character and maybe hinted he liked guys, but didn't kiss him without consent.
I would read this one if you serialized it. I really like it and your writing style. Though the man is a kind of bad representation of the gay community - you can read my story How to Be the Best Internet Writer in the World: You Can Write Slash and Be Homophobic for more details - so I'd prefer it if he teased the main character and maybe hinted he liked guys, but didn't kiss him without consent.
8/14/2017 c5 3aPondInTime
I love all of your 'story starts'. But I think this one and the Bloodwings sequel intrigue me the most.
3aPondInTimeI love all of your 'story starts'. But I think this one and the Bloodwings sequel intrigue me the most.
8/14/2017 c4 aPondInTime
Ooh! Does this mean you're going to finish Bloodwings? I think this is one of my favourite excerpts.
Ooh! Does this mean you're going to finish Bloodwings? I think this is one of my favourite excerpts.