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1/27/2006 c1 Tom Lourne
A really great poem. You really capture what it is like to be sad.
8/21/2002 c1 1ZetaReticuli
wow...fantastic... I really like you writing, you're able to put your deppest feelings in words, thats an amazing talent!
1/5/2002 c1 Ever1
Great poem. I can relate to it a lot as i have been feeling like this since my sister went missing July 2001. Read extracts from my journal 'Hell and Back'
5/19/2001 c1 26Irides
...words, sometimes explain more than pictures, curse the saying. It's just...so similar, something that's just realistic, just the way how the person actually feels...I love this poem.
5/15/2001 c1 1Mika-cha
wow... that was really good... depressing but something that I like... wow... u really know how some people feel... ::Mika::
3/14/2001 c1 Ashley
I love poetry and write it too but all the poems i've read sucked but you're a very good writer. Keep up the good work. ^_^
2/2/2001 c1 3Nightengale
that is to to true. It just sounds right. i like your anology there.
12/30/2000 c1 46The Reaper
i like, i like alot.
10/31/2000 c1 Kojiro
Depressing is good. This is depressing. This is good!

Reminds me of...Javert... (:)
10/2/2000 c1 12Jennifer Ever Zero
That one...struck a nerve. You are a great poet, but that disturbed me very much and I don't think I'll look back at it. Just the way it sounds, it's almost like being trapped in your head. Not to mention that I hate the ocean, and you make it a point to make it sound as depressing and scary as possible.
9/13/2000 c1 Katrina
I sometimes feel like I can't get out myself sometimes. It's really good. :P
7/14/2000 c1 IMeMine
Beautifully done, as always, a masterpiece!
7/7/2000 c1 21janet84
In the physical world - this was me today - was windsurfing and drifted into weeds - was stuck for about 20 minutes, the waves pushing me in more every time I try. Good poem - I can relate to it on both a spiritual, emotional level and obviously physical.

~Please read my stuff!~
7/5/2000 c1 159Heather Goldbug
This is when you need a friend to swim out and bring you back, but how do you get them to notice, anyhow? I guess they have to find you. Well, I think this poem describes my feelings very well, if not perfectly. Good job, keep on writing!
6/11/2000 c1 Pikabit
Oh my god that was awesome. You capture emotions perfectly. No criticism from me! Write more!
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