for The Deepest Ocean8/21/2002 c1 
1ZetaReticuli
wow...fantastic... I really like you writing, you're able to put your deppest feelings in words, thats an amazing talent!
1ZetaReticuliwow...fantastic... I really like you writing, you're able to put your deppest feelings in words, thats an amazing talent!
1/5/2002 c1 Ever1
Great poem. I can relate to it a lot as i have been feeling like this since my sister went missing July 2001. Read extracts from my journal 'Hell and Back'
Great poem. I can relate to it a lot as i have been feeling like this since my sister went missing July 2001. Read extracts from my journal 'Hell and Back'
5/19/2001 c1 26Irides
...words, sometimes explain more than pictures, curse the saying. It's just...so similar, something that's just realistic, just the way how the person actually feels...I love this poem.
26Irides...words, sometimes explain more than pictures, curse the saying. It's just...so similar, something that's just realistic, just the way how the person actually feels...I love this poem.
5/15/2001 c1 1Mika-cha
wow... that was really good... depressing but something that I like... wow... u really know how some people feel... ::Mika::
1Mika-chawow... that was really good... depressing but something that I like... wow... u really know how some people feel... ::Mika::
3/14/2001 c1 Ashley
I love poetry and write it too but all the poems i've read sucked but you're a very good writer. Keep up the good work. ^_^
I love poetry and write it too but all the poems i've read sucked but you're a very good writer. Keep up the good work. ^_^
10/31/2000 c1 Kojiro
Depressing is good. This is depressing. This is good!
Reminds me of...Javert... (:)
Depressing is good. This is depressing. This is good!
Reminds me of...Javert... (:)
10/2/2000 c1 12Jennifer Ever Zero
That one...struck a nerve. You are a great poet, but that disturbed me very much and I don't think I'll look back at it. Just the way it sounds, it's almost like being trapped in your head. Not to mention that I hate the ocean, and you make it a point to make it sound as depressing and scary as possible.
12Jennifer Ever ZeroThat one...struck a nerve. You are a great poet, but that disturbed me very much and I don't think I'll look back at it. Just the way it sounds, it's almost like being trapped in your head. Not to mention that I hate the ocean, and you make it a point to make it sound as depressing and scary as possible.
9/13/2000 c1 Katrina
I sometimes feel like I can't get out myself sometimes. It's really good. :P
I sometimes feel like I can't get out myself sometimes. It's really good. :P
7/14/2000 c1 IMeMine
Beautifully done, as always, a masterpiece!
Beautifully done, as always, a masterpiece!
7/7/2000 c1 21janet84
In the physical world - this was me today - was windsurfing and drifted into weeds - was stuck for about 20 minutes, the waves pushing me in more every time I try. Good poem - I can relate to it on both a spiritual, emotional level and obviously physical.
~Please read my stuff!~
21janet84In the physical world - this was me today - was windsurfing and drifted into weeds - was stuck for about 20 minutes, the waves pushing me in more every time I try. Good poem - I can relate to it on both a spiritual, emotional level and obviously physical.
~Please read my stuff!~
7/5/2000 c1 159Heather Goldbug
This is when you need a friend to swim out and bring you back, but how do you get them to notice, anyhow? I guess they have to find you. Well, I think this poem describes my feelings very well, if not perfectly. Good job, keep on writing!
159Heather GoldbugThis is when you need a friend to swim out and bring you back, but how do you get them to notice, anyhow? I guess they have to find you. Well, I think this poem describes my feelings very well, if not perfectly. Good job, keep on writing!
6/11/2000 c1 Pikabit
Oh my god that was awesome. You capture emotions perfectly. No criticism from me! Write more!
Oh my god that was awesome. You capture emotions perfectly. No criticism from me! Write more!