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12/26/2018 c16 4Nitewrite
Hi there! I was just passing through and I saw you changed your story description (I think) and I really like it a lot. Hopefully I have time some time soon to finish reading! I forgot how much I liked your characters!
12/22/2017 c14 Anon
Hmmm... Was ben lowkey flirting with Twyla? And what will the grimoire reveal? Exciting indeed!
12/8/2017 c11 Nitewrite
Great story so far!
11/22/2017 c1 TempestInATeacup
This is an interesting start, I love the unique first person perspective on humans, but I really think that the title could have been named something more engaging
9/14/2017 c1 Guest
cool
9/13/2017 c1 18Seudonimo Voldeminty
You've made a very good start. The only thing that confused me was the interaction with Gun Guy ... she walked past the humans to the door, then the gun was at the back of her neck and the man says she was coming right toward him? And she turns to face the class but the gun doesn't leave her neck until Charlie defuses the situation. It just seemed a bit unclear. Looking forward to more! :)
9/13/2017 c1 1popopo8
Whoa, write more soon!
9/13/2017 c1 icestars
i like the new story so far. interesting first chapter

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