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1/28 c2 250Synthey
oh damn oH DAMN first of all I really liked the first chapter, the style of the writing is my favourite to read . THE SECOND THOUGH! simply beautiful!
9/30/2017 c1 19Ckh
We are not entitled to be loved - thats kinda the harsh truth of life. But everyone does deserve a shot at love, even if the experience is just a little while.

I like how you expanded on the word "string" in your second paragraph. Stuff like that is what I look out for.

-From the Reviewing Crusade.
9/18/2017 c1 ablueindividual
I like the mention of young boys and strings (I never thought of all those uses for them!
and how it related to the title? Well, I hope I'm getting somewhere)
To that hierarchy of innocence to all things these adult things, then the very sad question in the end.
Great job in stirring up my thoughts!

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