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18Seudonimo Voldeminty
Brilliant. The topic/subject fits so well with the prompt and you bring out the feelings through your choice of words and sentence structure to connect it all. The first part feels a little bit off-kilter but then I really get into the sway of it. It was enjoyable to read and it's always nice to look at life, take a step back and say: okay, I need to do something different! So, thank you!
18Seudonimo VoldemintyBrilliant. The topic/subject fits so well with the prompt and you bring out the feelings through your choice of words and sentence structure to connect it all. The first part feels a little bit off-kilter but then I really get into the sway of it. It was enjoyable to read and it's always nice to look at life, take a step back and say: okay, I need to do something different! So, thank you!