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6/1/2019 c1 6Prime Jeremy
I love it so far, it's different and kind of refreshing.
4/22/2019 c6 14Fall Storm
I really do like this story so far. It flows quite well and it's a good job introducing the characters, you got me interested in this, partly because of the magic Fantasy and Adventure, I just love things with magic and Adventure . I'm looking forward to seeing more. and I like Adlis and Za.
11/29/2017 c3 6WolfGoesBaa
The pacing fit this chapter well. It was fast and encompassed the action well. I also like the interaction between Kulga and Tikta. They play off each other well.

It was [omr] of only two in Everdry - one?
11/29/2017 c2 WolfGoesBaa
The Gray Ranger seems like the typical smart ass hero but let's hope there's a heart somewhere in there. This is starting to look like an old west inspired story, what with the desert, talk of guns and raiding gangs... but with magic.

Zam and Zagyr [and] more than enough - are
11/29/2017 c1 WolfGoesBaa
I really like the story so far. It flows well and you do a good job introducing the characters of Adlis and Za. Although I wonder how they got there if they don't know that it would takes multiple coaches for them to get home.

He scratched [be] back of his neck awkwardly. - the

Good chapter.

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