for Innocent Love11/6/2017 c1 
18One Winged A2
This was a sweet read. I admit I am a sucker for fluffy femslash stories, and this was no exception.
That said, I do wish it was a little bit longer. It felt over far too quickly. For that, I recommend adding the character's thoughts as part of the paragraphs. Those little things can be your best friends when writing.
Best regards,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE
18One Winged A2This was a sweet read. I admit I am a sucker for fluffy femslash stories, and this was no exception.
That said, I do wish it was a little bit longer. It felt over far too quickly. For that, I recommend adding the character's thoughts as part of the paragraphs. Those little things can be your best friends when writing.
Best regards,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE