for Kuber's Compound5/3 c8 
39Starart152
This was an intense chapter where the group must get some supplies. It was a major one and there was only two groups who went to reach it. Some might focused more on the small supply drops since the risk might be smaller.
As for the fight, it was quite intense and it could have gone wrong at any moment. Siro hesitations almost cost the life of Seth in this fight.
39Starart152This was an intense chapter where the group must get some supplies. It was a major one and there was only two groups who went to reach it. Some might focused more on the small supply drops since the risk might be smaller.
As for the fight, it was quite intense and it could have gone wrong at any moment. Siro hesitations almost cost the life of Seth in this fight.
1/9 c1 Crimson Horizon
Hello,
I hope you're doing great! I recently came across your story "Kuber's Compound" and was genuinely impressed by how compelling and creative it is. It immediately inspired me to imagine how amazing it would look as a comic or manga.
As a commission artist, I specialize in translating stories into dynamic visuals and I believe your work has incredible potential to shine in this format. Just to be clear, I work exclusively on a commission basis and wanted to make that clear from the start.
If this aligns with your vision, feel free to reach out to me through these platforms:
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Hello,
I hope you're doing great! I recently came across your story "Kuber's Compound" and was genuinely impressed by how compelling and creative it is. It immediately inspired me to imagine how amazing it would look as a comic or manga.
As a commission artist, I specialize in translating stories into dynamic visuals and I believe your work has incredible potential to shine in this format. Just to be clear, I work exclusively on a commission basis and wanted to make that clear from the start.
If this aligns with your vision, feel free to reach out to me through these platforms:
Discord: sabon1_
Twitter: Feeliphee_
DeviantArt: ZamainLov
Looking forward to hearing from you!
10/4/2024 c1 daiki.hinata001
Hey there! Hope you’re doing great!
I just finished reading your story Kuber's Compound on your Fanfiction profile, and I was completely hooked! Your storytelling is incredible, and it sparked an exciting idea—I’d love to turn it into a comic, bringing the action and emotion to life in my unique comic style!
I’ve already started planning how it would flow across pages and panels, and I think this could be something really special. If you're interested, I’d be thrilled to work on this as a commission. I’m a digital artist with a few open spots, and my work focuses on delivering high-quality, visually captivating comics. My rates are fair, and I’m confident you’ll love the final product.
Let me know if this sounds interesting! We can discuss more details and ideas on Discord whenever you're ready.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
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Hey there! Hope you’re doing great!
I just finished reading your story Kuber's Compound on your Fanfiction profile, and I was completely hooked! Your storytelling is incredible, and it sparked an exciting idea—I’d love to turn it into a comic, bringing the action and emotion to life in my unique comic style!
I’ve already started planning how it would flow across pages and panels, and I think this could be something really special. If you're interested, I’d be thrilled to work on this as a commission. I’m a digital artist with a few open spots, and my work focuses on delivering high-quality, visually captivating comics. My rates are fair, and I’m confident you’ll love the final product.
Let me know if this sounds interesting! We can discuss more details and ideas on Discord whenever you're ready.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Here's My Discord: _daiki1
7/22/2024 c38 6Darth Zannacross
Ah, a few weeks behind but just saw this is up, doh.
But lets check out what's going on with the birds today.
Delta is being as devilish as ever now, but she might have broke Sagari past her limit because she's blowing up and...oh...oh hell she's dead.
Delta really did not think this through...or she just wanted to die...but I guess after all the pain she caused this is what she deserved.
So then...is this it or are we entering a new phase of this Compound? Either way a rather epic chapter so keep up the great work and till next time.
6Darth ZannacrossAh, a few weeks behind but just saw this is up, doh.
But lets check out what's going on with the birds today.
Delta is being as devilish as ever now, but she might have broke Sagari past her limit because she's blowing up and...oh...oh hell she's dead.
Delta really did not think this through...or she just wanted to die...but I guess after all the pain she caused this is what she deserved.
So then...is this it or are we entering a new phase of this Compound? Either way a rather epic chapter so keep up the great work and till next time.
6/21/2024 c7 39Starart152
We got a glimpse about how dangerous Delta is and also the other group that crossed path with. Siro Sagiri and Seth are going to go through a tough time if they crossed path with her or the other group.
There is a chance that the alliance they have right now turn against them and put them into trouble. It all depend what will happen later.
39Starart152We got a glimpse about how dangerous Delta is and also the other group that crossed path with. Siro Sagiri and Seth are going to go through a tough time if they crossed path with her or the other group.
There is a chance that the alliance they have right now turn against them and put them into trouble. It all depend what will happen later.
6/18/2024 c37 6Darth Zannacross
Damn, because the site's been messed up with the E mails for a while I did not get the email saying this was out, so lets make up for lost time.
Delta has almost reached her" Final form" it seems but...for now she gels well with Maya...but she seemed to be enjoying things to much as they pushed Davis to far...with lethal consequences.
Davis paid to for not thinking this through...though this Jorgstien thinks he's above this and...is going to most likely pay for that, but for now, we see Delta descend into the monster she's been across the series...so now lets see how the others can overcome this rage it seems.
Another intense chapter, hopefully the site's update function will be working by the time the next chapter is out but till then as always hope you have time for my stories sooner or later, best of luck with your own stuff and till next time have a good summer.
6Darth ZannacrossDamn, because the site's been messed up with the E mails for a while I did not get the email saying this was out, so lets make up for lost time.
Delta has almost reached her" Final form" it seems but...for now she gels well with Maya...but she seemed to be enjoying things to much as they pushed Davis to far...with lethal consequences.
Davis paid to for not thinking this through...though this Jorgstien thinks he's above this and...is going to most likely pay for that, but for now, we see Delta descend into the monster she's been across the series...so now lets see how the others can overcome this rage it seems.
Another intense chapter, hopefully the site's update function will be working by the time the next chapter is out but till then as always hope you have time for my stories sooner or later, best of luck with your own stuff and till next time have a good summer.
5/29/2024 c2 6Viewer27Man
A young man wanting to compete gives his name to some guards and is applying to be a squad leader. Behind him is a girl who's been blunt since she's been young. Next up is a guy with a distinct smirk that might not be what it seems while the guard wishes they were cultists. Then the guard needs a weapons check on the squad leader's sniper gun and hammer and the girl's kunai as she and the smirking guy give the guard flak for not knowing, and the girl gets mad a the smirking guy for calling her a ninja in the process. Then the guard questions the smirking guy's pistol then contemplates the 3's survivability, and scans for concealed weaponry. The 3 move on and the squad leader feels anxious from seeing bracelets and monitors and wonders if the girl is. Then they meet the technicians who give them resilient tracking bracelets and collars with tons of removal penalties. The guard then reminds them that the elevator is the point of no return, but they got this. They get their bracelets and on the elevator. Getting off the elevator the guard asks for their squad name and they tell him.
This is a chapter of the entrance process into this reality show city. This is feeling more like a manga/anime than the prologue with the kunai and the mix between punk/flashy/edgy/subjectively geeky attitudes of the 3 characters. This story feels like it's going to be grim one way or another.
So far these 3 seem to be the protagonists. It's just a sign-up security clearance so there isn't much in the way of what kind of actions they'll take, but we do get some of their dialogue and thoughts. Siro seems nervous, but wants to do this. Sagiri is not afraid to be blunt or corrective, but doesn't seem particularly mouthy either. Seth seems mouthy and quippy.
Favorite Part: The thoroughness of the trackers with their resilience, penalties, and back up measures; those make too much sense to not all be here all things considered. I also like the slight 'geekiness' traits I think I see in the trio.
6Viewer27ManA young man wanting to compete gives his name to some guards and is applying to be a squad leader. Behind him is a girl who's been blunt since she's been young. Next up is a guy with a distinct smirk that might not be what it seems while the guard wishes they were cultists. Then the guard needs a weapons check on the squad leader's sniper gun and hammer and the girl's kunai as she and the smirking guy give the guard flak for not knowing, and the girl gets mad a the smirking guy for calling her a ninja in the process. Then the guard questions the smirking guy's pistol then contemplates the 3's survivability, and scans for concealed weaponry. The 3 move on and the squad leader feels anxious from seeing bracelets and monitors and wonders if the girl is. Then they meet the technicians who give them resilient tracking bracelets and collars with tons of removal penalties. The guard then reminds them that the elevator is the point of no return, but they got this. They get their bracelets and on the elevator. Getting off the elevator the guard asks for their squad name and they tell him.
This is a chapter of the entrance process into this reality show city. This is feeling more like a manga/anime than the prologue with the kunai and the mix between punk/flashy/edgy/subjectively geeky attitudes of the 3 characters. This story feels like it's going to be grim one way or another.
So far these 3 seem to be the protagonists. It's just a sign-up security clearance so there isn't much in the way of what kind of actions they'll take, but we do get some of their dialogue and thoughts. Siro seems nervous, but wants to do this. Sagiri is not afraid to be blunt or corrective, but doesn't seem particularly mouthy either. Seth seems mouthy and quippy.
Favorite Part: The thoroughness of the trackers with their resilience, penalties, and back up measures; those make too much sense to not all be here all things considered. I also like the slight 'geekiness' traits I think I see in the trio.
5/22/2024 c1 Viewer27Man
2 score ago...2 men have their priorities: ratings, gathering crime to a place, and potential complaints of human rights activists at the bottom. Apparently the gang wars will be fun to watch because televised executions are currently popular in this universe. A woman welcomes them and agrees to let 'them' know when they are ready and leaves the room. One of the men looks on the bright side: They have military support, economic advantages, jobs before they realize they need to discuss funding for this. They are together and the profits will be split 50/50. The woman returns and invites the lucky guys in to meet 'them'. 1.5 score ago...Construction begins hiring locals and compromises are made on an a no-fly zone that's years in the making and needs an entrance. With a river and communications built they have material supply issues and still need the cameras and electricity. The no questions man has a son that needs to be watched and brags that his plan would get bad guys off the streets. The 2 call to complain about the safety mumbo jumbo, the complications of the knockout injections they need, and that they need thick walls with about 2 years left to launch. 1.25 score ago... the no questions man is waiting to showtime for the show 23 years in the making that began filming 5 days ago when a lot of people who will likely do questionable things showed up. He then brags in his head about the story he's writing without having to write anything. Some people are not going to make it on this show...After the countdown there's basic footage as a host introduces the titular place.
This prologue is basically the making of the reality show of the story that's planned to be full of real danger and thrills because of all the lawless people there. There is little in the way of bright colors anywhere in this prologue; the clothes are beige and gray. Most of the chapter is about logistics issues and the ever annoying ethical issues while waiting years with anticipation for the airing.
Manga could definitely cover this subject matter, but since it starts on an extended scene of production with business men in a realistic modern world rather than a thrilling hook scene or jumping right into the city, it feels more like a live-action or simply the start of a book to me than a manga.
The only 2 characters of note are Alexander and Gabriel. They are both business men who want to get this show going and can easily put ethics aside and complain more ethical concerns more than anything. The main difference between them is that Alexander actually raised questions of if this is a good idea while Gabriel (no question man) doesn't. That being said Alexander's argument was more concerned that human rights people would complain than what they would complain about... They don't have villainous air about them per say aside from their priorities... Their solution to any ethical issue is that as long as it looks good to anyone who could and would hold them responsible it's fine...
Just saying...Their plan...sounds like a huge disaster that will happen...the only question is who all's face will it explode in?...
Favorite Part: The countdown effect to the first showing.
2 score ago...2 men have their priorities: ratings, gathering crime to a place, and potential complaints of human rights activists at the bottom. Apparently the gang wars will be fun to watch because televised executions are currently popular in this universe. A woman welcomes them and agrees to let 'them' know when they are ready and leaves the room. One of the men looks on the bright side: They have military support, economic advantages, jobs before they realize they need to discuss funding for this. They are together and the profits will be split 50/50. The woman returns and invites the lucky guys in to meet 'them'. 1.5 score ago...Construction begins hiring locals and compromises are made on an a no-fly zone that's years in the making and needs an entrance. With a river and communications built they have material supply issues and still need the cameras and electricity. The no questions man has a son that needs to be watched and brags that his plan would get bad guys off the streets. The 2 call to complain about the safety mumbo jumbo, the complications of the knockout injections they need, and that they need thick walls with about 2 years left to launch. 1.25 score ago... the no questions man is waiting to showtime for the show 23 years in the making that began filming 5 days ago when a lot of people who will likely do questionable things showed up. He then brags in his head about the story he's writing without having to write anything. Some people are not going to make it on this show...After the countdown there's basic footage as a host introduces the titular place.
This prologue is basically the making of the reality show of the story that's planned to be full of real danger and thrills because of all the lawless people there. There is little in the way of bright colors anywhere in this prologue; the clothes are beige and gray. Most of the chapter is about logistics issues and the ever annoying ethical issues while waiting years with anticipation for the airing.
Manga could definitely cover this subject matter, but since it starts on an extended scene of production with business men in a realistic modern world rather than a thrilling hook scene or jumping right into the city, it feels more like a live-action or simply the start of a book to me than a manga.
The only 2 characters of note are Alexander and Gabriel. They are both business men who want to get this show going and can easily put ethics aside and complain more ethical concerns more than anything. The main difference between them is that Alexander actually raised questions of if this is a good idea while Gabriel (no question man) doesn't. That being said Alexander's argument was more concerned that human rights people would complain than what they would complain about... They don't have villainous air about them per say aside from their priorities... Their solution to any ethical issue is that as long as it looks good to anyone who could and would hold them responsible it's fine...
Just saying...Their plan...sounds like a huge disaster that will happen...the only question is who all's face will it explode in?...
Favorite Part: The countdown effect to the first showing.
7/9/2023 c36 6Darth Zannacross
Delta shows she's at the point where she just embraces the " Thrill of the hunt" so to speak, and from here, Seth and the others thought they were prepared but...clearly not as much as they had to be.
I guess Delta was not as prepared as she thought to though if she fell into Wasponi's trap...although if she wanted to end it quickly she should have had the psycho gutted the moment they got there hands on her.
But, omega bombshell dropped when Siro found out that...all this time...Wasponi was Sagiri? Well if she's not a zombie then...next chapter might be just a tad awkward...but quite eager to see where things go from here so another great chapter with well written tension and action. Keep up the great work and best of luck getting the next one out soon.
6Darth ZannacrossDelta shows she's at the point where she just embraces the " Thrill of the hunt" so to speak, and from here, Seth and the others thought they were prepared but...clearly not as much as they had to be.
I guess Delta was not as prepared as she thought to though if she fell into Wasponi's trap...although if she wanted to end it quickly she should have had the psycho gutted the moment they got there hands on her.
But, omega bombshell dropped when Siro found out that...all this time...Wasponi was Sagiri? Well if she's not a zombie then...next chapter might be just a tad awkward...but quite eager to see where things go from here so another great chapter with well written tension and action. Keep up the great work and best of luck getting the next one out soon.
6/28/2023 c35 Darth Zannacross
Ah glad we got past the curtain faster then expected, things are escalating quickly today as we see more of what drove Delta to become the terror she is.
We have a tense negotiation with Jona that almost seems like it will be civil but...quickly goes to hell and we get a nice bought of gunplay, things look on the verge of falling apart, hope we see soon if Merrick can keep things from falling apart entirely.
But for now another nice intense chapter, thanks for the review of Patriots previously, best of luck with your own stuff and till next time.
Ah glad we got past the curtain faster then expected, things are escalating quickly today as we see more of what drove Delta to become the terror she is.
We have a tense negotiation with Jona that almost seems like it will be civil but...quickly goes to hell and we get a nice bought of gunplay, things look on the verge of falling apart, hope we see soon if Merrick can keep things from falling apart entirely.
But for now another nice intense chapter, thanks for the review of Patriots previously, best of luck with your own stuff and till next time.
5/3/2023 c6 39Starart152
Our trio met another trio and it seems like there are a bit on a good foot. Still, Sagiri, Seth and Siro should be careful as they know little of them.
It seems a little too good and too cheezy the trio they encountered. They were there for a few months and I am not sure they wouldn't lose a few things in their mind.
39Starart152Our trio met another trio and it seems like there are a bit on a good foot. Still, Sagiri, Seth and Siro should be careful as they know little of them.
It seems a little too good and too cheezy the trio they encountered. They were there for a few months and I am not sure they wouldn't lose a few things in their mind.
5/1/2023 c34 6Darth Zannacross
Welcome back, we got a hefty dose of murder today as things return, more then usual at least lol.
More looks in the past to see how Delta's senses sharpened into one of a mass murderer, even more clear now that Maya seems to be the one who molded her into the bane of Siro and co.
Sounds like Gareth's going to be a " Sacrifice" for Delta's evolution but we will see.
Ah well as always keep up the great work, hope you have time to check out my own stuff sooner then later and have a good start to May.
6Darth ZannacrossWelcome back, we got a hefty dose of murder today as things return, more then usual at least lol.
More looks in the past to see how Delta's senses sharpened into one of a mass murderer, even more clear now that Maya seems to be the one who molded her into the bane of Siro and co.
Sounds like Gareth's going to be a " Sacrifice" for Delta's evolution but we will see.
Ah well as always keep up the great work, hope you have time to check out my own stuff sooner then later and have a good start to May.
1/1/2023 c33 Darth Zannacross
Happy new Years to you as well Quicksand.
As the cast finds something to believe in, Siro is trying to make sure his faith to keep his word is worth believing in. But more of the tension is with Tabitha acting all Delta like, one Delta is enough of a walking disaster.
Speaking of that, Delta's a storm of sorts, having a whole group of fan-girls with her makes it even worst for anyone around.
Siro is one of the few who seem to realize how messed up things are getting but, we will see just how much carnage goes down soon it seems. Till then crossing fingers you will have more time for writing and maybe checking out more of my stuff when you have the time. But till then keep up the great year and welcome to 2023.
Happy new Years to you as well Quicksand.
As the cast finds something to believe in, Siro is trying to make sure his faith to keep his word is worth believing in. But more of the tension is with Tabitha acting all Delta like, one Delta is enough of a walking disaster.
Speaking of that, Delta's a storm of sorts, having a whole group of fan-girls with her makes it even worst for anyone around.
Siro is one of the few who seem to realize how messed up things are getting but, we will see just how much carnage goes down soon it seems. Till then crossing fingers you will have more time for writing and maybe checking out more of my stuff when you have the time. But till then keep up the great year and welcome to 2023.
12/30/2022 c5 39Starart152
A good chapter where we get a bit more insight on Sagiri and her thought process, before we focused on them finding a way to survive for the night.
The flow of the plot so far goes to the priority that the trio needs to satisfy before they move on to another one. Which is what the ending of this chapter is telling me.
39Starart152A good chapter where we get a bit more insight on Sagiri and her thought process, before we focused on them finding a way to survive for the night.
The flow of the plot so far goes to the priority that the trio needs to satisfy before they move on to another one. Which is what the ending of this chapter is telling me.
7/7/2022 c32 6Darth Zannacross
And we are back at the compound, sorry things have been stressful for you, hope your doing ok.
Siro is doing ok after his last " Dance" with Delta" but, some king of wounds never seem to heal, like...getting a X shaped scar across your chest...damn.
With no Batman or Sherlock Homes on the scene Crasidine tries to get on top of things like who's in a slicing mood, and for the sake of all the good guys lets hope she is on the ball at least on how to handle things as tension is rising and rising.
Seth, Erizia and some of the others are trying to get everyone to be one coherent workable group and they better be able to pull it off...Delta is down but not out and is looking like she is keen on unleashing some very, VERY savage payback, hope Siro is ready for it.
Well once more another great chapter, do hope the next one will come out sooner but best of luck with everything, still crossing my fingers you might like some of my own stuff and till next time take care Quicksand.
6Darth ZannacrossAnd we are back at the compound, sorry things have been stressful for you, hope your doing ok.
Siro is doing ok after his last " Dance" with Delta" but, some king of wounds never seem to heal, like...getting a X shaped scar across your chest...damn.
With no Batman or Sherlock Homes on the scene Crasidine tries to get on top of things like who's in a slicing mood, and for the sake of all the good guys lets hope she is on the ball at least on how to handle things as tension is rising and rising.
Seth, Erizia and some of the others are trying to get everyone to be one coherent workable group and they better be able to pull it off...Delta is down but not out and is looking like she is keen on unleashing some very, VERY savage payback, hope Siro is ready for it.
Well once more another great chapter, do hope the next one will come out sooner but best of luck with everything, still crossing my fingers you might like some of my own stuff and till next time take care Quicksand.