for The Fount of Dragon Fire2/1/2018 c11 Skye Blue Meadows
Wow. Way to go Sylvia and Blaire you ladies are awe. Thank you so much Ash you definitely earned some brownie points with that escape. So glad Camry is out of there finally worried about what the long term affects could be. Can't wait to see what happens next in this adventure. Poor Adler such a sweet guy so sad he had to die so early. Thank you for the update looking forward to the next part of this adventure.
Wow. Way to go Sylvia and Blaire you ladies are awe. Thank you so much Ash you definitely earned some brownie points with that escape. So glad Camry is out of there finally worried about what the long term affects could be. Can't wait to see what happens next in this adventure. Poor Adler such a sweet guy so sad he had to die so early. Thank you for the update looking forward to the next part of this adventure.
2/1/2018 c11 
4oh-my-wizard-g0d
I can honestly say I don't know where this story is exactly headed, and I actually appreciate that. Looking forward to the next.
4oh-my-wizard-g0dI can honestly say I don't know where this story is exactly headed, and I actually appreciate that. Looking forward to the next.
1/25/2018 c10 Skye Blue Meadows
Poor Camry, I wonder what will happen next. I cant blame her for not wanting to say anything before about what she can do. She is getting tortured now for no other reason that so is no longer considered human in some peoples eyes. She didn't hurt anyone but went out of her way to protect Ash and she is getting tortured. Who knows what else this evil scientist Thad has done to her. Will Ash see the video? I can't wait for the next chapter and thank you for sharing your world with us. I will make sure to R&R from now on.
Poor Camry, I wonder what will happen next. I cant blame her for not wanting to say anything before about what she can do. She is getting tortured now for no other reason that so is no longer considered human in some peoples eyes. She didn't hurt anyone but went out of her way to protect Ash and she is getting tortured. Who knows what else this evil scientist Thad has done to her. Will Ash see the video? I can't wait for the next chapter and thank you for sharing your world with us. I will make sure to R&R from now on.
1/25/2018 c10 amelie
what a psycho
what a psycho
1/18/2018 c9 Ameloe
Exciting update
Exciting update
1/17/2018 c9 4oh-my-wizard-g0d
This was an intense chapter. Great and vivid imagery. Looking forward to the next one. Nervous!
4oh-my-wizard-g0dThis was an intense chapter. Great and vivid imagery. Looking forward to the next one. Nervous!
1/12/2018 c8 amelie
Noo don't kill him
Noo don't kill him
1/10/2018 c8 oh-my-wizard-g0d
Oh my god. That was not something I was expecting. I'm sad. I hope he will recover.
Oh my god. That was not something I was expecting. I'm sad. I hope he will recover.
1/3/2018 c7 oh-my-wizard-g0d
Did you mean to reupload chapter 6? Maybe it's a glitch on my part, but chapter 6 and 7 are the same uploaded chapter.
Did you mean to reupload chapter 6? Maybe it's a glitch on my part, but chapter 6 and 7 are the same uploaded chapter.
12/23/2017 c5 oh-my-wizard-g0d
This is such an intriguing concept. And the world you've built, though not entirely foreign, is already well developed and crafted. I love the romance between the two already. This will definitely be interesting to read as you further the story. Well written too! The dialogue is great!
This is such an intriguing concept. And the world you've built, though not entirely foreign, is already well developed and crafted. I love the romance between the two already. This will definitely be interesting to read as you further the story. Well written too! The dialogue is great!