
5/2/2018 c22
12Dark Oracle
Some wounds never heal, do they?
Cross will remember this mistake, hopefully, and become a better man and paladin for it.

Some wounds never heal, do they?
Cross will remember this mistake, hopefully, and become a better man and paladin for it.
4/27/2018 c21 Dark Oracle
Ah...and here we see the young Cross's utter loathing for all things draconian.
Ah...and here we see the young Cross's utter loathing for all things draconian.
4/21/2018 c20
7WolfGoesBaa
Woah, didn't even notice this new chapter until recently. The more I read about Ixis and Ellie, the more I love their pairing. They play off well off one another and are very funny.
So, I'm guessing the plan is to follow their journey through the World's Fangs or maybe have Cross and his party take up some of the parts?
Good Chapter!

Woah, didn't even notice this new chapter until recently. The more I read about Ixis and Ellie, the more I love their pairing. They play off well off one another and are very funny.
So, I'm guessing the plan is to follow their journey through the World's Fangs or maybe have Cross and his party take up some of the parts?
Good Chapter!
4/2/2018 c20
12Dark Oracle
Ixis certainly is a dour fellow, isn't he?
I imagine he and Cross will meet sooner rather than later...but I can't help but wonder what the Order thinks of having a Karakiri amidst their ranks, especially considering his parentage.

Ixis certainly is a dour fellow, isn't he?
I imagine he and Cross will meet sooner rather than later...but I can't help but wonder what the Order thinks of having a Karakiri amidst their ranks, especially considering his parentage.
2/1/2018 c19
7WolfGoesBaa
This is probably the funniest chapter so far. Ixis and Ellie play well off each other with Willie's talkative and friendly nature and Ixis' cold and quiet demeanor.
Good chapter

This is probably the funniest chapter so far. Ixis and Ellie play well off each other with Willie's talkative and friendly nature and Ixis' cold and quiet demeanor.
Good chapter
1/30/2018 c19
12Dark Oracle
The end of one journey, and the start of another.
Ixis has much to learn, and a long path to tread.

The end of one journey, and the start of another.
Ixis has much to learn, and a long path to tread.
1/25/2018 c17
7WolfGoesBaa
Uhm... can anyone say cool? Boys staring creepily into the waters and raining fish guts. When this chapter began, I thought Ellie was going to die for sure with the number of death flags you planted with the whole - I'm going to be a Paladin and I'm so happy lines. It was almost unbearable... not her happiness but the suspicion that she was so close but she'd ultimately die for some dumb reason. But instead of death, you give us a cool character Ixis.
Thank you!

Uhm... can anyone say cool? Boys staring creepily into the waters and raining fish guts. When this chapter began, I thought Ellie was going to die for sure with the number of death flags you planted with the whole - I'm going to be a Paladin and I'm so happy lines. It was almost unbearable... not her happiness but the suspicion that she was so close but she'd ultimately die for some dumb reason. But instead of death, you give us a cool character Ixis.
Thank you!
1/24/2018 c18
12Dark Oracle
Vengeance is a terrible thing...even when well intended, it often causes great tragedy to those the perpetrator holds dear. Much like power, solely devoting one's life to the pursuit of revenge is to seek a wretched end.
Hopefully Kel will be able to find something more to live for, before his quest forces him to become the very thing he hunts...

Vengeance is a terrible thing...even when well intended, it often causes great tragedy to those the perpetrator holds dear. Much like power, solely devoting one's life to the pursuit of revenge is to seek a wretched end.
Hopefully Kel will be able to find something more to live for, before his quest forces him to become the very thing he hunts...
1/22/2018 c13
2The Badass Chronicler
I wanted to refrain from reading this honestly, because I knew it was just gonna break my heart. Cross you've done an excellent job so far with this it's a fun, not wordy and to the point. This reminds me so much of the old BMK. I don't know what's happened to me, it's like I'm censoring myself or some shit lately with my work. It's shit and I know by reading this.
Anyway I gotta get back to fixing that shit. Keep goin' ya passionate bass-tard! XD

I wanted to refrain from reading this honestly, because I knew it was just gonna break my heart. Cross you've done an excellent job so far with this it's a fun, not wordy and to the point. This reminds me so much of the old BMK. I don't know what's happened to me, it's like I'm censoring myself or some shit lately with my work. It's shit and I know by reading this.
Anyway I gotta get back to fixing that shit. Keep goin' ya passionate bass-tard! XD
1/20/2018 c16
7WolfGoesBaa
A wretched man who loves his 'family'. You've created an interesting villain here, who's on a collision course to our heroes... or at least Kel.
Good Chapter!

A wretched man who loves his 'family'. You've created an interesting villain here, who's on a collision course to our heroes... or at least Kel.
Good Chapter!
1/15/2018 c16
12Dark Oracle
There's always consequences for a fight like that, and it looks like there's a lot of outside interest on current events that Kel and Cross might get mixed up in...

There's always consequences for a fight like that, and it looks like there's a lot of outside interest on current events that Kel and Cross might get mixed up in...
1/15/2018 c15 Dark Oracle
Everyone has their reasons for what they do, no matter how good or ill. The sadness is that often the best intentions of the best of people are brought about by tragedy, and may often lead to it.
Everyone has their reasons for what they do, no matter how good or ill. The sadness is that often the best intentions of the best of people are brought about by tragedy, and may often lead to it.
1/8/2018 c12
7WolfGoesBaa
And the attack begins. Doesn't seem like a fair fight, I mean there's like a a group of bandits versus Kel and Cross' small group? The bandits should get reinforcement.
A member of Team…Talys…I [belive]. - [believe]
She could [fee] him, grabbing a hold of her arm, his meaty hand... - [feel]

And the attack begins. Doesn't seem like a fair fight, I mean there's like a a group of bandits versus Kel and Cross' small group? The bandits should get reinforcement.
A member of Team…Talys…I [belive]. - [believe]
She could [fee] him, grabbing a hold of her arm, his meaty hand... - [feel]
1/8/2018 c10 WolfGoesBaa
Argh, Kel with that grating personality of his. I must admit, you have a pretty good handle on the character. The battle was well done with the right amount of action and excitement, leaving us wanting more, wanting a conclusion.
I'm really liking this story.
Argh, Kel with that grating personality of his. I must admit, you have a pretty good handle on the character. The battle was well done with the right amount of action and excitement, leaving us wanting more, wanting a conclusion.
I'm really liking this story.