for Children of Ash1/17/2023 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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12/25/2017 c1 SpaceCowboy4
The premise of your story, depicted in the synopsis, really had me wanting to read this story. I think this is an excellent idea, and my mind is already reeling with possibilities of where this story can go. The first chapter has some action, some character introductions, and even a little mystery. But it struggles with grammar issues, particularly with dialogue.
The premise of your story, depicted in the synopsis, really had me wanting to read this story. I think this is an excellent idea, and my mind is already reeling with possibilities of where this story can go. The first chapter has some action, some character introductions, and even a little mystery. But it struggles with grammar issues, particularly with dialogue.