for Questionable Poetry7/27/2018 c7 Luna Abbot
Yes! Yes, that is exactly what I think!
P.S. love ya hope you're doing okay since your last post k bye
Yes! Yes, that is exactly what I think!
P.S. love ya hope you're doing okay since your last post k bye
2/19/2018 c7 
265Synthey
Oooh this one's definitely my favourite! it's like reading a journal. I also love how the word count starts to increase as the chapters progress, I love it!
265SyntheyOooh this one's definitely my favourite! it's like reading a journal. I also love how the word count starts to increase as the chapters progress, I love it!
2/8/2018 c4 97rust phoenix
I really appreciate and relate to this sentiment. It's a weird feeling being a writer, and carrying that fear of being misunderstood but also the fear of going fully into expressing what you mean. I like hearing your thoughts, though, and seeing how you give shape to these ideas.
97rust phoenixI really appreciate and relate to this sentiment. It's a weird feeling being a writer, and carrying that fear of being misunderstood but also the fear of going fully into expressing what you mean. I like hearing your thoughts, though, and seeing how you give shape to these ideas.
12/26/2017 c7 2Sir Scott
Overall, pretty good poetry. Perhaps, we can use some more romance. Some of us anyway, some people seem to have more than they deserve.
~Sir Scott
2Sir ScottOverall, pretty good poetry. Perhaps, we can use some more romance. Some of us anyway, some people seem to have more than they deserve.
~Sir Scott
12/26/2017 c2 Sir Scott
That's a good question. I have asked myself that before and concluded that I wouldn't do anything differently.
~Sir Scott
That's a good question. I have asked myself that before and concluded that I wouldn't do anything differently.
~Sir Scott
12/17/2017 c7 19Ckh
Well, don't we all?
I'll read your romance novel once you get around to releasing it.
19CkhWell, don't we all?
I'll read your romance novel once you get around to releasing it.
12/17/2017 c6 Ckh
The greatest sufferers often create the best art. Why though? Why L.I.F.E.?
Your last lines were fairly inspiring.
The greatest sufferers often create the best art. Why though? Why L.I.F.E.?
Your last lines were fairly inspiring.
12/17/2017 c5 Ckh
Some wise words were said here. I believe that a soul never really dies, that it still carries on, despite its broken state. Even if it can never be rebuilt, some things will still be alright. Yeah, some things will still be alright, I can say that to myself at least.
Some wise words were said here. I believe that a soul never really dies, that it still carries on, despite its broken state. Even if it can never be rebuilt, some things will still be alright. Yeah, some things will still be alright, I can say that to myself at least.
12/17/2017 c4 Ckh
All the fears you describe here are common fears that writers have - no, every creator has. A few famous creators have even admitted to their own weaknesses. Yet, they strive on, despite their fear. A simple encouragement helps. I think that's what it means to create.
All the fears you describe here are common fears that writers have - no, every creator has. A few famous creators have even admitted to their own weaknesses. Yet, they strive on, despite their fear. A simple encouragement helps. I think that's what it means to create.
12/17/2017 c3 Ckh
Don't we all lose our muses to L.I.F.E.? I could dig all my muses up and shamelessly combine them into one freak random story but what the point?
Don't we all lose our muses to L.I.F.E.? I could dig all my muses up and shamelessly combine them into one freak random story but what the point?
12/17/2017 c1 Ckh
So close to a haiku, yet so far. I feel that mission started; miles walked flows a bit better but what do I know? [feet ache; heart happy] is a sweet line.
So close to a haiku, yet so far. I feel that mission started; miles walked flows a bit better but what do I know? [feet ache; heart happy] is a sweet line.
12/16/2017 c7 70BradytheJust
Oh! Please do!
We need a lot of love and a ton more of your poetry Lorrah! :D
Regardless. thank you for sharing your poems and when you write that Romance I'll be reading it!
70BradytheJustOh! Please do!
We need a lot of love and a ton more of your poetry Lorrah! :D
Regardless. thank you for sharing your poems and when you write that Romance I'll be reading it!