for City Black I
1/9/2018 c1 
5xhroriavery well written with the mystery and suspense build up. i definitely want to see what is going to happen to her since she has been through so much already. great start!
12/21/2017 c1 2J.CousyNice start here. Dragged me in. The narration is done in a way that it's not only easy to follow, but it flows in a way that makes me want to keep reading. Left a bit of mystery in there to make me want to come back and see where it goes. Keep it up
for City Black I
5