for The Lane of Time10/15/2018 c1 
36Anna Christie
This is very musical and that last line hits hard. As someone who struggles with depression, it felt personal for me.
I especially love "with dreams undreamt and hopes bestowed."
Beautiful, vivid, strong imagery as always.
36Anna ChristieThis is very musical and that last line hits hard. As someone who struggles with depression, it felt personal for me.
I especially love "with dreams undreamt and hopes bestowed."
Beautiful, vivid, strong imagery as always.
12/28/2017 c1 ughwhy
I think this is a fantastic poem.
It gives me the impression that the poet is in awe of time but also is wary of how time passes. Absolutely loved the third stanza. It stands out to me from the whole lot. I enjoyed it.
Great job! Please write more.
Cheers.
I think this is a fantastic poem.
It gives me the impression that the poet is in awe of time but also is wary of how time passes. Absolutely loved the third stanza. It stands out to me from the whole lot. I enjoyed it.
Great job! Please write more.
Cheers.