
6/25/2018 c57 Chrisi
Whoa! I'm so glad she was okay and they finally got together! I felt the end was a little rushed, but I'm assuming their relationship will continue in Jack's story since it's a sequel and will be where we left off? I love these characters and can't wait to read more :)
Whoa! I'm so glad she was okay and they finally got together! I felt the end was a little rushed, but I'm assuming their relationship will continue in Jack's story since it's a sequel and will be where we left off? I love these characters and can't wait to read more :)
6/24/2018 c57 Lina
What? Wasn't the end a little rushed? I wanted to see more of Clara and Theo in a relationship... :(
Anyway, it was a nice story!
What? Wasn't the end a little rushed? I wanted to see more of Clara and Theo in a relationship... :(
Anyway, it was a nice story!
6/23/2018 c57 Reader
So happy to have so many chapters to catch up on. That was one heck of a roller coaster ride you took us on. I'm really impressed with this little story and definitely invested in the sequels. Can't wait for Jacks POV.
So happy to have so many chapters to catch up on. That was one heck of a roller coaster ride you took us on. I'm really impressed with this little story and definitely invested in the sequels. Can't wait for Jacks POV.
6/17/2018 c55 Chrisi
OMG How can you end a chapter like that?! My heart stopped! I really really hope Lily is okay and those two stop assuming stuff about the other's feelings.
OMG How can you end a chapter like that?! My heart stopped! I really really hope Lily is okay and those two stop assuming stuff about the other's feelings.
6/16/2018 c55 Lina
WHAT!? Noooooooooooooo! Please no! :'(
WHAT!? Noooooooooooooo! Please no! :'(
6/9/2018 c53 Reader
Woah! Had so much to catch up on. I'm so glad he is finally acknowledging his feelings for Clara. Just needs to take a leap of faith now.
Woah! Had so much to catch up on. I'm so glad he is finally acknowledging his feelings for Clara. Just needs to take a leap of faith now.
5/7/2018 c47 Reader
Woah! Theo needs to get his shit together. He really does know how to fuck things up royally. I hope Clara makes him stew a bit. Calling her stupid was a step too far. Also, because he loves cars so much, I think Theo needs a service. He's got some parts that need fixing lol.
Woah! Theo needs to get his shit together. He really does know how to fuck things up royally. I hope Clara makes him stew a bit. Calling her stupid was a step too far. Also, because he loves cars so much, I think Theo needs a service. He's got some parts that need fixing lol.
5/2/2018 c46 Lina
I feel like Theo is being a little selfish. He's missing moments with his daughter and all. I'm disappointed with him...
I feel like Theo is being a little selfish. He's missing moments with his daughter and all. I'm disappointed with him...
4/20/2018 c44 Reader
Ooo. I'm not sure how I feel about that! I know she's drunk but Jack isn't. What happened to the bro code? Don't think Theo will like that one bit. Not sure if I do either. Morals people! Will it escalate? They're walking on thin ice me thinks.
Ooo. I'm not sure how I feel about that! I know she's drunk but Jack isn't. What happened to the bro code? Don't think Theo will like that one bit. Not sure if I do either. Morals people! Will it escalate? They're walking on thin ice me thinks.
4/19/2018 c44 Lina
OH. MY. GOD. Did you already had this planned? :O I'm torn between feeling satisfied or worried... Ouch, poor Theo. D: Oh well, this will be interesting. xD I really can't wait for the next chapter! Please come back soon! :)
OH. MY. GOD. Did you already had this planned? :O I'm torn between feeling satisfied or worried... Ouch, poor Theo. D: Oh well, this will be interesting. xD I really can't wait for the next chapter! Please come back soon! :)
4/18/2018 c43 Lina
I can't wait for next chapter then! I really like the story so far... :)
I can't wait for next chapter then! I really like the story so far... :)
4/14/2018 c43 Reader
I'm always reading! I love the direction of where this is going. Clara's on Theo's home turf now so I'm hoping she'll reach out to him more and we'll see more moments together *not so subtly elbows author*
I'm always reading! I love the direction of where this is going. Clara's on Theo's home turf now so I'm hoping she'll reach out to him more and we'll see more moments together *not so subtly elbows author*
4/14/2018 c42 Lina
I want Clara to go out with someone! Why is Theo the only one who can to do that? :(
I want Clara to go out with someone! Why is Theo the only one who can to do that? :(
4/7/2018 c41 Reader
Loving the progress so far! So glad Theos heads finally catching up with his heart. Do something to get your girl man! I can't wait to read more.
Loving the progress so far! So glad Theos heads finally catching up with his heart. Do something to get your girl man! I can't wait to read more.