
2/6/2018 c1
8LorrahBear
This is a wonderful expression of feeling, and I can only want to reach out, despite the warnings. Lovely job.
I only noticed one small thing, which may have been intentional but just in case: you used “racked” when I think you meant “wracked.”
Fantastic work!

This is a wonderful expression of feeling, and I can only want to reach out, despite the warnings. Lovely job.
I only noticed one small thing, which may have been intentional but just in case: you used “racked” when I think you meant “wracked.”
Fantastic work!