for Dark Hero7/2/2018 c8 
6Darth Zannacross
And so the puppet show from hell resumes. Heh, Kukuro eh? Wonder if he's talked with fellow puppet user Kankurō from Naruto lol. Well if he did he took his notes poorly, thankfully the puppets here are a lot weaker or things could have gotten dicey.
Well, this battle is taking its toll but at least Luna is alive, for now. We will see if that holds true as the puppet show goes on.
6Darth ZannacrossAnd so the puppet show from hell resumes. Heh, Kukuro eh? Wonder if he's talked with fellow puppet user Kankurō from Naruto lol. Well if he did he took his notes poorly, thankfully the puppets here are a lot weaker or things could have gotten dicey.
Well, this battle is taking its toll but at least Luna is alive, for now. We will see if that holds true as the puppet show goes on.
7/1/2018 c1 19dmasterxd
*Resists urge to make a joke about Zurka’s sharp junk* XD Very interesting start. I’m curious to learn more about Luna and see how Zurka’s love for her will affect his growth. It was mostly just establishing characters and the world as it was only chapter 1, but it was very intriguing and done well, so nice job. Definitely curious to see how everything will play out especially in regards to Zurka’s dad and the other monsters/demons who will show up.
19dmasterxd*Resists urge to make a joke about Zurka’s sharp junk* XD Very interesting start. I’m curious to learn more about Luna and see how Zurka’s love for her will affect his growth. It was mostly just establishing characters and the world as it was only chapter 1, but it was very intriguing and done well, so nice job. Definitely curious to see how everything will play out especially in regards to Zurka’s dad and the other monsters/demons who will show up.
6/30/2018 c7 6Darth Zannacross
Well this turned into a horror movie rather quickly, well, at least the invader was not Jason or Freddy Kruger or this could have gotten ugly lol. Then again with it being a puppet problem sounds like a sequel to Chunky lol.
Well, things are getting rather nasty, hopefully total disaster will be adverted, we will see. Till next time keep it up.
6Darth ZannacrossWell this turned into a horror movie rather quickly, well, at least the invader was not Jason or Freddy Kruger or this could have gotten ugly lol. Then again with it being a puppet problem sounds like a sequel to Chunky lol.
Well, things are getting rather nasty, hopefully total disaster will be adverted, we will see. Till next time keep it up.
6/29/2018 c6 Darth Zannacross
Zurka better be sure she loves him back or he's going to have given up everything for nothing lol.
Well, awkward night got even more awkward, and dangerous after a death threat, we will see if it can be salvaged next time.
Zurka better be sure she loves him back or he's going to have given up everything for nothing lol.
Well, awkward night got even more awkward, and dangerous after a death threat, we will see if it can be salvaged next time.
6/27/2018 c5 Darth Zannacross
Back to the darkness, and we are back with more hostile family relations lol.
Well, this brother is not as ruthless as the previous one but, still what a pain. Good he did not take advantage of her being unconscious. Well, we will see if she can be won over, till next time.
Back to the darkness, and we are back with more hostile family relations lol.
Well, this brother is not as ruthless as the previous one but, still what a pain. Good he did not take advantage of her being unconscious. Well, we will see if she can be won over, till next time.
4/29/2018 c4 Darth Zannacross
Did not think Zurka could pose as a human with how, awkward he could be but here we are lol.
Well, another brother, another clash over " love". We will see how long Yaur lasts I guess.
Did not think Zurka could pose as a human with how, awkward he could be but here we are lol.
Well, another brother, another clash over " love". We will see how long Yaur lasts I guess.
4/27/2018 c3 Darth Zannacross
Ah, and love causes tragedy between family already, and they hardly been alive a week, at best lol.
Still, damn Keiken's a fast learned, hardly a day old and knows the shadow clone jutsu, Naruto approves! Wait its just the After Image skill, eh, did not help in the end.
Damn, that got brutal fast. Well, we will see how this romance between human and demon can go, I suppose it can go like it did in Yu Yu Hakusho, we will see.
Welp, till next time at demon school.
Ah, and love causes tragedy between family already, and they hardly been alive a week, at best lol.
Still, damn Keiken's a fast learned, hardly a day old and knows the shadow clone jutsu, Naruto approves! Wait its just the After Image skill, eh, did not help in the end.
Damn, that got brutal fast. Well, we will see how this romance between human and demon can go, I suppose it can go like it did in Yu Yu Hakusho, we will see.
Welp, till next time at demon school.
4/26/2018 c2 Darth Zannacross
Being created just to find out what happened to your sibling, seems a lot easier just to look at the news or make a satellite I suppose lol.
Geeze, Zurka can't handle envy very well at the moment, well, at least love is stopping him from going on a murder spree, so far at least.
Well, the brothers meet and came into even more conflict faster then Goku and Ratiz lol, we will see what mess comes from this.
Being created just to find out what happened to your sibling, seems a lot easier just to look at the news or make a satellite I suppose lol.
Geeze, Zurka can't handle envy very well at the moment, well, at least love is stopping him from going on a murder spree, so far at least.
Well, the brothers meet and came into even more conflict faster then Goku and Ratiz lol, we will see what mess comes from this.
4/25/2018 c1 Darth Zannacross
Ah, a demonic hero eh? He should fine Hellboy, they might be able to be decent friends lol.
" My heard is acting weird?" Is, that suppose to be head? "
Well...seems like Zurka could have gotten some Sex-Ed before he went to do his duty and all, we will see what antics come out from this.
Ah, a demonic hero eh? He should fine Hellboy, they might be able to be decent friends lol.
" My heard is acting weird?" Is, that suppose to be head? "
Well...seems like Zurka could have gotten some Sex-Ed before he went to do his duty and all, we will see what antics come out from this.
3/13/2018 c3 6Pleb's Stories
This doesn't look all that bad, mate, I like it! The one thing I want to note is that sometimes there are grammatical errors, but that's totally fine, revision is easily able to fix that stuff, especially with someone else's eyes. Anyways, hope you do more of this!
6Pleb's StoriesThis doesn't look all that bad, mate, I like it! The one thing I want to note is that sometimes there are grammatical errors, but that's totally fine, revision is easily able to fix that stuff, especially with someone else's eyes. Anyways, hope you do more of this!