for A Matter of Instinct12/28/2021 c3 delilahryan98
Well, great story and so interesting. Anyway I found an information about werewolf writing contest and I think you should join the contest and win the prize
Here is the link:
bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC
p.s: you should delete the space at the link first
Well, great story and so interesting. Anyway I found an information about werewolf writing contest and I think you should join the contest and win the prize
Here is the link:
bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC
p.s: you should delete the space at the link first
12/7/2019 c1 
14Mislav
Really interesting and intriguing story. The opening was especially tense and creepy. I actually felt sorry for Oscar. Your writing style here kind of reminded me of Stephen King's. I appreciate the bit of backstory you provided for Anthony. Good detail with the liver. Is the killer Pre-Nat too? I didn't expect the hunter to show up. So, he's using fake IDs to get in the precinct and interact with law enforcement? The reveal about four other victims really surprised me. I liked the banter between Anthony and Valentine at the end. I wonder which one will get to the werewolf first. My favorite part was: ""Five," Valentine said, nodding. "So get off your high horse and let's work together to get this finished quickly, unless you're okay with this maniac killing again."
"I thought you hunters hated Pre-Nats."
"We do," Valentine said. "I mean, you're all evil pieces of shit, right? And all hunters are bloodthirsty killers who judge everyone immediately by the silver bracelet. That's why you're still alive, clearly. Because I hate you. Because I killed you the second I saw your bracelet."
"Do you have a point?"
Valentine stared at him for a moment. Just stood there and stared like he couldn't figure out a puzzle. Then he shrugged, blinked, and walked away. Just like that.
Anthony stepped after him. "Wait, what?"
"I changed my mind."
"Just like that?"
"Just like that."
"Hey, asshole." Anthony easily caught up to him. Cut him off, and stopped in front of him. Valentine stopped and looked at him. He had to angle his head up at this short distance. "You can't just demand my help and walk away."
"I didn't demand. I said it would be more productive if we worked together, but I changed my mind. Your services are no longer needed, or wanted." Valentine stepped around him.
"Just like that?"
"Yep."
"Then why even demand my help in the first place?"
"Have a good day, Detective."
Anthony watched Valentine disappear around a corner, and then turned back to his car."
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to reading more.
14MislavReally interesting and intriguing story. The opening was especially tense and creepy. I actually felt sorry for Oscar. Your writing style here kind of reminded me of Stephen King's. I appreciate the bit of backstory you provided for Anthony. Good detail with the liver. Is the killer Pre-Nat too? I didn't expect the hunter to show up. So, he's using fake IDs to get in the precinct and interact with law enforcement? The reveal about four other victims really surprised me. I liked the banter between Anthony and Valentine at the end. I wonder which one will get to the werewolf first. My favorite part was: ""Five," Valentine said, nodding. "So get off your high horse and let's work together to get this finished quickly, unless you're okay with this maniac killing again."
"I thought you hunters hated Pre-Nats."
"We do," Valentine said. "I mean, you're all evil pieces of shit, right? And all hunters are bloodthirsty killers who judge everyone immediately by the silver bracelet. That's why you're still alive, clearly. Because I hate you. Because I killed you the second I saw your bracelet."
"Do you have a point?"
Valentine stared at him for a moment. Just stood there and stared like he couldn't figure out a puzzle. Then he shrugged, blinked, and walked away. Just like that.
Anthony stepped after him. "Wait, what?"
"I changed my mind."
"Just like that?"
"Just like that."
"Hey, asshole." Anthony easily caught up to him. Cut him off, and stopped in front of him. Valentine stopped and looked at him. He had to angle his head up at this short distance. "You can't just demand my help and walk away."
"I didn't demand. I said it would be more productive if we worked together, but I changed my mind. Your services are no longer needed, or wanted." Valentine stepped around him.
"Just like that?"
"Yep."
"Then why even demand my help in the first place?"
"Have a good day, Detective."
Anthony watched Valentine disappear around a corner, and then turned back to his car."
Keep up the great work. Looking forward to reading more.
3/8/2018 c6 Wavern16 'Inactive
Ohhh, this just got a whole lot more interesting! I wonder what's gonna happen next :D
Awesome as usual!
Ohhh, this just got a whole lot more interesting! I wonder what's gonna happen next :D
Awesome as usual!
3/1/2018 c5 Wavern16 'Inactive
I just now realized that your "Jack" is precisely based on Jack Reacher, isn't he? XD Why did I not see this coming, you've been going gaga over the books for a while!
Great work again, and update soon! This is getting really interesting!
I just now realized that your "Jack" is precisely based on Jack Reacher, isn't he? XD Why did I not see this coming, you've been going gaga over the books for a while!
Great work again, and update soon! This is getting really interesting!
3/1/2018 c4 Wavern16 'Inactive
I'll tell you what would make 'sense' is that the psychic ended up being Chloe. Why else introduce her into the story the way you did and have Jack ask about her afterwards? XD
Awesome story dude! I love it so far! I just love the couple that end up kinda bickering at each other first before they realized, hey, they might fall for each other, XD, it's great!
I'll tell you what would make 'sense' is that the psychic ended up being Chloe. Why else introduce her into the story the way you did and have Jack ask about her afterwards? XD
Awesome story dude! I love it so far! I just love the couple that end up kinda bickering at each other first before they realized, hey, they might fall for each other, XD, it's great!