
5/31/2018 c12 Amelie
Thought it might be so since Giles wouldnt poison nat!
Thought it might be so since Giles wouldnt poison nat!
5/29/2018 c11 Elizabeth Mayfair the witch
This must be by far my favorite book of the series. That last sceen broke my heart. Can't wait for the next update...
This must be by far my favorite book of the series. That last sceen broke my heart. Can't wait for the next update...
5/27/2018 c11 Amelie
No updates this week :((
No updates this week :((
5/24/2018 c11 Guest
I love your stories! I've read most of them and they just make my day. Keep up the great work!
I love your stories! I've read most of them and they just make my day. Keep up the great work!
5/16/2018 c11 C. M. Brighid Bachleda
I can't wait to read the look on Sam's face when he discovers that Nat is a princess and the surprises keep on coming...
I can't wait to read the look on Sam's face when he discovers that Nat is a princess and the surprises keep on coming...
5/9/2018 c10 Guest
I'm so invested in this story, I can't even...! Such strong willpower Nat has.
I'm so invested in this story, I can't even...! Such strong willpower Nat has.
5/9/2018 c10 C. M. Brighid Bachleda
Should have punched him in the gut and ran...any way...
Sadly the egg belongs to Oceane and can't be return...
Cliffhanger...
Should have punched him in the gut and ran...any way...
Sadly the egg belongs to Oceane and can't be return...
Cliffhanger...
5/3/2018 c9 Guest
Noooooooooo. Of course Sam would show up. I was hoping she would announce herself as the 4th princess. But this leaves the possibility open for more intrigue, especially on Giles’s part.
But, it’s interesting, was it Lady Alcie’s push to have Sam leave Rhamnus? Something’s up with her, and I don’t like it.
Noooooooooo. Of course Sam would show up. I was hoping she would announce herself as the 4th princess. But this leaves the possibility open for more intrigue, especially on Giles’s part.
But, it’s interesting, was it Lady Alcie’s push to have Sam leave Rhamnus? Something’s up with her, and I don’t like it.
5/3/2018 c9 Amelie
Another cliff hanger
Another cliff hanger
5/2/2018 c9 Guest
I'm screaming. I love this story so much. It's my favorite out of the series.
I'm screaming. I love this story so much. It's my favorite out of the series.
4/28/2018 c8 Guest
Read all the chapters in 2 days! This is such a unique and original storyline, I'm loving it. Thought there could have been a bit more details and build up for how Nat planned to steal the egg though. But can't wait to read and find out what happens next!
Read all the chapters in 2 days! This is such a unique and original storyline, I'm loving it. Thought there could have been a bit more details and build up for how Nat planned to steal the egg though. But can't wait to read and find out what happens next!
4/26/2018 c8
9Scevity
I very often tell myself that I will not read your stories until they are completed-for the simple fact that the writing is so well composed, the characters so well developed, and the plots so interesting that it is impossible to stop reading them. (And rereading them. I'm quite certain that I have read and reread each story that you publish here more frequently than I have read the books in my physical library. You are, unequivocally, my favorite author, regardless of whether the books in question are physically published or located online.)
So I wait, knowing that if I begin a story before it is finished I will only regret it as I wait, impatiently trying to predict how the story will unfold. And then, around halfway through your typical amount of chapters, I break. And the characters are so easy to fall in love with, that I race through the story, unable to tear myself away. As I have once again.
Which is a long way of saying that your writing-impressive even in your early stories-continues to improve with every tale you create. I cannot wait to see what else comes from your mind.

I very often tell myself that I will not read your stories until they are completed-for the simple fact that the writing is so well composed, the characters so well developed, and the plots so interesting that it is impossible to stop reading them. (And rereading them. I'm quite certain that I have read and reread each story that you publish here more frequently than I have read the books in my physical library. You are, unequivocally, my favorite author, regardless of whether the books in question are physically published or located online.)
So I wait, knowing that if I begin a story before it is finished I will only regret it as I wait, impatiently trying to predict how the story will unfold. And then, around halfway through your typical amount of chapters, I break. And the characters are so easy to fall in love with, that I race through the story, unable to tear myself away. As I have once again.
Which is a long way of saying that your writing-impressive even in your early stories-continues to improve with every tale you create. I cannot wait to see what else comes from your mind.