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4/29/2018 c1 Azurra
Nice start to this story. Your writing is very descriptive and interesting. Just a quick note: maybe try to not use Gray's name so much and instead use different words, such as "he." It would help make it less repetitive. You might also want to make your blurb based on the plot more, or give reader's an idea about what they can expect to happen. But, otherwise, great stuff. Keep it up.

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