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6/4/2020 c1 5PhoenixArisen
Haha, this is funny because I'm currently drinking tea when I read this. I like the light-hearted tone of this poem overall. Well done!
8/18/2019 c1 6She Who Loves Pineapples II
Haha, I appreciate the sentiment!
7/2/2018 c1 25sprinkled clean
Witty title (;
6/26/2018 c1 21RainbowPearls
This was so sweet. It lifted my little down mood. The speaker seems to be lively and positive. "Care for a short break"- It makes me think that the second person over there is busy and too involved in his/her work that he's/she's completely forgotten about the surroundings. The speaker tries to left the mood and make her distract. If only she would drink it and rest with the speaker smiling for sometime in the break :D
6/20/2018 c1 7Nemone
Lol, indeed a break would be good. I am boring myself to death with name lists trying to create some characters so I can update my fiction work. I haven't tried haiku for a long time, I almost forgot how many syllables belong in each line. This one made me smile because I didn't expect to be invited to take a break. Very thoughtful of you, hehe.
6/15/2018 c1 3Xarken
LOL, that got a chuckle out of me. Good stuff my friend.
5/3/2018 c1 26Zukafu Chiriamoto
"Thank you very much," she says,
taking the cup with care.
"Would you like a biscuit?"

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