for Their Sin5/18/2018 c1 
18One Winged A2
I admit, I was a little apprehensive about reading this, not because of the incest itself but rather how a lot of these stories are typically not well written and turn into giant smutfests.
Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised. Not only did you make it seem realistic (which a lot of authors try but fail at), but you didn't turn it into just pointless sex. There was actual emotion involved.
The only minor critique I could make is that I wish it was just a little bit longer. Particularly the part where you mention the blood spilled between Noah and his family.
Still, that minor critique aside, I enjoyed reading.
Best,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE
18One Winged A2I admit, I was a little apprehensive about reading this, not because of the incest itself but rather how a lot of these stories are typically not well written and turn into giant smutfests.
Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised. Not only did you make it seem realistic (which a lot of authors try but fail at), but you didn't turn it into just pointless sex. There was actual emotion involved.
The only minor critique I could make is that I wish it was just a little bit longer. Particularly the part where you mention the blood spilled between Noah and his family.
Still, that minor critique aside, I enjoyed reading.
Best,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE